Traditional Art Sasuke

Ok my first Sasuke drawing so tell me how it is. Also i kinda messed up on the shading.
http://i204.photobucket.com/albums/bb261/cobrademon/Sasuke.jpg

 

Your style reminds me of the one for Shaman King. :3 But the lineart is a little stiff.. The cheeks turned out too much triangle like, I would advise you to smoothen them up so that they get a more round feel as well. Study what other artists have done to see what I mean.

The eyes are like cubes. You should keep in mind that the eyeballs are like tiny balls, only kept in place by the eye lids. So draw the eyeballs first, then add the eyelids. Concerning the hair, it's very stiff - you don't get the impression that it's made of strands of hair. Try to be more daring and playful when you draw any type of hair, it will always have this flow that is special.

The upper body is too small for the head, it could need some resizing. Also remember to not make the neck too long. The neck of the outfit is very thin.... add another circle to indicate that it's made of fabric for clothes and not made of paper.

If you want a tip for colouring with pencils, you should always cross shade lightly in the start, then press the pencil harder and harder for the darker spots - and don't be affraid to mix different colours together! This is how a basic cross shade works:

start lightly
\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\

add more
////////////////

darken
\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\

darken more
///////////////

Don't forget to also follow the shape of the object as you shade - there is no rule that says that you can't shade in bows instead of straight lines.

 

better then anything i can draw lol

 

Its great but the chin needs more arrangements. Id give ya a 8/10, he reminds me of the character in LoZ: OoT the poor guy.

 

well it is my first sasuke drawing

 

Of course, but this could have happened to other characters than Sasuke too, you know. :> My only true advice would be to continue drawing, but that you use guidelines to build up the head and body in the start.