This is a poem I wrote. I don't think this one is very good, but this is why I'm posting it! Tell me what you think! Here it goes... I can feel the warmth on my skin Warmth- the good feeling of emotion Love; Happiness; Sorrow; Greed The sand in my tears... The sky...can rob you of your feelings, silently, slowly The love has left, the hate and pain overcome You finally feel free, but you're held by strings The strings of life The sand in my tears... Rushing water, crawling up my skin, covering my warmth The barrier...is supposed to protect me but it's harming me My soul has been ripped out, my spirit gently glides away Now I know my purpose, my destiny The sand in my tears...
