This MIGHT be edited in the future, Im a little tired right now so it'll be imperfect but I wanna write and the forum cant refuse me >8D *evil laughs* Anyway.. :3 Run away with me, I'll hold your hand forever, I'll be with you through day and night We'll run away together. You'll hold me softly in your arms, And lift me till we fly, 'Cause surely those are angel's wings That keep me in the sky. You cling so tight, so very tight, I hear the pounding of my heart, I know this is what was missing in life, The puzzle piece from the very start. Surely I'm just dreaming, I'm just scared for when I rise, What if all those moments were make believe? All those kisses under moonlit skies? But I shouldn't fear, For I wake to find, You right here with me. Finally. Your mine. This is what happens when I'm deprived of sleep and emotional *shifty eyes* Love you all <3 Comments are win.
That was very good. The ending didn't have too much flow though. But I don't know how I would change it D=.
Thanks 8D xD I think I just asked you to read this and you did already :3 Hmm..yeah...I know the ending was a little weird with the flow.. I'd chnage it but I want it weird 8D
<_< *is jealous of your poetry skills* It was really pretty and sweet, and it rhymed beautifully. Good job!
...I'm jealous of your poetry writing skills. xDD That was great as well. Like P E A N U T said, the ending flow was a little weird, but it was still good. Great job.
