Roxas's Forgotten Memories ch-2

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  1. Shuhbooty moon child

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    I ran into the dark corner of a club house and look around amilessly tring to find roxas

    "Roxas!Roxas!Are you in here?!Roxas!"

    I contiuned to repeat myself till someone replyed..And did

    "Finally we found you!"

    "What?Who's there!Show yourself!"

    "Very soon you shall become one of us!"

    I was in shock,I couldn't move.I was scared,was that my brother I just saw out there?Was it a trick?Wha-what am I going to do?Am I gonna die?

    "Can I have a name!Just who the hell are you!"

    I wanted a anwser,just who was this guy?

    I stould there trying to see a stream of light so I could exscape,but couldn't find it.Was this the end?

    ok chapter 3 will be here in a few hours it took me somw time to do chapter2 because ch1 didn't come out so well so i have to fix it with ch3 and 4 hope you liked it=)
     
  2. xiegin Destiny Islands Resident

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    OOO dis is good although i havnt read 1 yet i lik it its goin good great job
     
  3. Shuhbooty moon child

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    thanks this chapter isn't much but chapter 3 will make up for it
     
  4. Rosey Chaser

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    A little short, but i understand when you need to make a chapter small, so that you can make the other ones better. GOOD JOB!:D
     
  5. Shuhbooty moon child

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    yeah sorry,but thanks i'm working on chapter 3 right now
     
  6. Rikus#1fangirl Banned

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    Where is chapter 1?
     
  7. Shuhbooty moon child

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