yep that's right i tried to draw Sora and well yeah umm it turned out to be a young looking Roxas - looks kinda cute in my opinion http://angelsneedflight.deviantart.com/art/Young-Roxas-67458344
Wow thats good...lol I like to draw only in black and white too, cause when I colour it in it looks bad. He looks so pimp..well done!! xD
Gah, wow - that's a Roxas allright. To draw Sora you'll want the hair to be more like some sort of a star or shuriken or something - an explotion of long strands of hair going everywhere, but with a wide enough space. (only Square-Enix, I swear..) The Roxas hair's pretty good, but a little stiff with the lineart - to make the hair look more real you should play around with the stroke some more, hair = flow, right? :3 Let some of the strands of hair be shown for each "group", sort of. It looks pretty hard otherwise. Also, the face should be slimmer from the cheek to chins - not too much, since in this picture he's not a youth. But a little. Do I make any sense? I'm a bit dizzy so sorry if I'm not being constructive enough. @@;;
To add to that, his left arm looks out of place. I think it's cause the shoulder is little too big and out.
