Round and round we go.

Discussion in 'Archives' started by Chevalier, Aug 18, 2008.

  1. Chevalier Crystal Princess

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    well...i need CnC , since this is the first lyrics ive done in a while.

    but i wanted to give this song a crazy jump up and down feel....but with some rock(think paramore)

    here goes:


    Round and round we go



    verse 1
    Feeling the breeze of the night, thinking of things we can't find.

    getting our hopes up, thinking so much of...


    chorus

    Everything, and waking up
    trying to make sense of this we go.

    round and round we go.

    filling our thoughts in this bliss
    waitng a fake fantasy we go

    //round and round we go//

    verse 2
    Escaping from the lies of reality
    and going into real fantasy.
    waking up from dreamality.
    and taking a train towards fantasy.

    chorus

    brigde(not sure lol)

    we want more of this......(we want more!)
    we need more of this....(we want more)


    chorus

    round and round we go.....


    so guys...please CnC.
     
  2. Ashwa <3 Hollow Bastion Committee

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    When I read this, I had a Paramore "beat" in my head, and I thought it worked rather lovely together.

    That is my favorite line and I think it works amazingly as a lyric. I'm a huge fan of creative lyrics and that has to be a new favorite of mine. So good job so far!