Traditional Art rough copy

this is a rough copy i made and shaded a bit too. plz comment!

 

I'm going to move this to Traditional Art, alright? :]

 

I think that you have a very good start on learning how to draw anime characters (if you are just starting)

Just remember that females' faces are slimmer.
The necks are also slightly too wide

 

According to my point of view, I think that this was really a great beginning, really nice one, I personally like all your rough work, well doing.