Riku story

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  1. yushe\sora Twilight Town Denizen

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    This may be a little crapy becaues I'm sick for the frist chapi...
    well read and tell me pleas if it's crapy... XD
    Also read the prevew if you want to. Not much of a diffence
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    Capter 1: A new keyblade

    Riku and king smeed to be walking for hours in till Riku saw a Gummi Ship. "Mikey, are heading some where", asked Riku who had stoped walking. "Well... there's still some worlds that are very far away that didn't get Kingdom Hearts to rid the heartless there. There is also some princeses that need you to proteced them....

    Riku sighed and thought if it's grily grils then Kingdom Hearts stike me down were I stand. "... And I will pick you up in five days. Okay, Riku"? He nooded his head yes and climed in to the Gummi. Right after Mikey climed in, he got every thing straed and they blased off. Mikey turned to Riku and said "You look tired, you shoud get soom rest before we get there". Riku pulled his hood over his head and fell asellp in no time.
    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Few hours later~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

    Riku woke up to the sound of giglling girls. He pulled of his hood and saw three smiling girls in his face. The princeses, hu? They'er kinda cute. "You must be tat boy to help us. I'm Anna and over there is Sarah and Kaite". All three of them had brown hair and jeans on. Sarah had a blue top on with maching tennes, Kaite had a black top with white high healed shoes and Anan had a pink top with black dress shoes.

    "We set up a room for you too", Sarah told Riku as he was geting up. These girls are nice and look to be about fithteen... What the! Riku looked at his clouths and they were changed in to long purple pants and a black top. "What the hell did you do to my clouths"! The girls looked at him and left the room exsped Anna. "Riku... The king asked us to give you som new clouths and so..."

    Anan came up to him and kissed him. "You sucht asome musles", wispered Anna. Riku was so mad that he pushed in to the wall and yelled "I hate you so much". He went outside and left Anna with a broken arm. Riku found out that they were near a beach. He sat on the leged of a cliff and wacht the sun set. I wish I could see Kairi again.

    He had so many thought on how mucht he ruin peoples life in his home town. just the he hearda crk under him and he was falling to the rockey seas. I don't care if I die he thought before he hit the water.

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    ... Sorry Riku fans
     
  2. keylbader_twilight Traverse Town Homebody

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    This is hillarious. What's really funny is that's how Riku would really react. For making fun of Riku story, this isn't that bad. Good job!