Reminiscing

I meander back to my domain, rain lightly falling,
a subtle irony as the sands of time retract.

My subconscious awakens, steadily glaring up after the first
dance ends with a broken heart, which I can not mend.

A year later, the same scene plays out in almost the same effect,
but ends more joyously, a twinkle up in the cosmos.

I sit, shivering in the snow as I watch him return home late,
realizing he’s never going to learn from his dreams…

I grow irritated, the chill melted away from the grass, as a tux
exits a Lexus, the water begins to steam, he is ignoring me.

The same day comes for the third time as I laugh at his stupidity,
yet stare dumbfounded as she escapes without word or warning.

Compassionately, I being to understand him after the snow of last,
As I beam at his current date, knowing he chose the bestest.

And yet, the sands of time return to the end of our journey,
As I accompany his last date home, it’s been a great 3 years.

The wheels turning love to sadness, humor to jubilance.
As I park once more, Reminiscing.

Found this one hidden away on my hard drive, Hope you all like!!

 

Good job.

Again, I am loving those metaphors.

Your poems pwn.

My favorite verse was the 7th one.

Great job.
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never heard that one of my poems pwn before haha

 

I like this a lot; it has a sort of melancholiness about it that I love in poetry.

 

hmmm melancholyness, i've never been told that about this one, i've heard analysis from it being a stalker watching me to pwning but thanks!

 

Wow, this is good...awesome! XD Like Orange said...totally pwnsome! XDD​