Real World

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  1. Fellangel Bichael May

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    If we fail, we try again
    If we don't like our choice, we choose again
    If we don't like our path, we take another one
    If we imagine, we can do anything
    If we die, we revive with extra lives
    But this is the real world
    We cant redo fails
    We can't choose another if we don't like it
    We can't take another path in life if we started on one
    We can do everything we think of
    And when we die, we die
    We only have one life and choice
    And we must make the most of it

    My first poem. Hope u enjoyed it. ^_^
     
  2. Xendane Banned

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    It's actually pretty good, despite the few spelling errors here and there.

    I give it four stars.

    * * * *. There. Four stars.
     
  3. Fellangel Bichael May

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    SPELLING ERRORS?

    *Gasp* O_O
     
  4. Xendane Banned

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    Er... wait... Spelling errors... Grammatical errors... I got something mixed here...
     
  5. Fellangel Bichael May

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    Oh. Well cut me some slack. This is my first poem.
     
  6. Defame King's Apprentice

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    nice outlook on life
     
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