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  1. Yozora Archer

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    Im just going to experiment by writing down lyrics that pop up in mind, and I'll type em down in poem form. Read this on some site. Well, like my English teacher once said: "Poetry can be anything. Yes, even sex." So HA.


    I am no cannibal
    Softly these dry lips speak
    There is a light in the ground
    I cannot reach what is inside
    Sunlight fades and darkness shines
    What is it that has been going on all this time
    Confused I tare at your heart
    Don't tempt these thoughts
    Can there be something known
    Running is useless for someone like you
    Brought together by stupidty
    Isn't that something new
    What is it that you want
    Stop making me laugh
    Worthless are we in this fight
    I don't get this
    A ring in your hand ready for flight
    Fear cannot break what was once in my heart
    Damn, I like how that came out​


    Oh yeah...I forgot the second step. Had something to do with working on the lyrics put down from my mind. Eh, I'll work on that later. Anyway, I don't like how it came out. If anyone haves any idea of what it means, feel free to reply with your thought. (Please lol. And no, Im not a psycho.)​
     
  2. Yozora Archer

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    Erm, thanks. You can be honest about it, you know. Hit me. Bleh.

    ......

    I'll post up another one. I just like coming up with random stuff and putting it down.
     
  3. Amaury Chaser

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    Interesting poem there.

    By random, do you mean that you came up with stuff as you typed or you knew what you were going to type before typing?

    EDIT: My favorite part was this line: "Sunlight fades and darkness shines"
     
  4. Yozora Archer

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    I did a bit of both. Like, I came up with something random in my head, then changed a few things to my liking.

    It was like, 3 am when I wrote that, so. Lol
     
  5. Roxas&Sora4E Traverse Town Homebody

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    No, im serious. It was very good. It didnt even sound like a bunch of random lyrics. I liked it. :D
     
  6. Yozora Archer

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    Thanks then. Glad you are not just saying those words because you feel bad for me lol.


    Looking away
    I sit and pray
    Breaking my leg
    I wait and beg
    Nothing can prevail
    I miserably fail
    Take my hand
    As I stare at the sand
    The Wind rushes by
    And whispers goodbye
    Write me a story
    Or will I have to worry
    I fly with the birds
    Nothing is left to hide
    Torn from your arms
    I helplessly cry

    Writing that one cause Im bored and it's 4:28 am.
     
  7. Amaury Chaser

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    4:28 AM? Where do you live? :x It's 3:35 PM (PDT) here.

    Anyway, that poem was excellent.

    While they're in a somewhat depressing tone, the lines that are in bold gave me a good chuckle.
     
  8. Yozora Archer

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    Im not gonna tell you shiet on where I live. Lololol

    And whoa, I was expecting a different outcome of those lines. "Whoa dude that was so emo", not "Whoa dude that gave me a good chuckle" lol.
     
  9. Yozora Archer

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    Break into the next stop
    Life has begun
    And I've wanted to wait
    Calm your senses
    Open their eyes
    Look up the wall
    And see what's behind

    Train your voice
    Drop in with groove
    Take in their lies
    And drink in some booze
    Freshen up them tunes

    Crazy days have gone
    Lying in wait for the night
    Crawling closer to your heart
    Taring and building a start
    Climbing down your vines




    Again, a randomly made...poem? I dunno what to call it. Eh.
     
  10. Yozora Archer

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    every day's the same
    and i cant get your face
    out of my head
    i cant hold in these raging feelings
    why are you all alone?
    and why arent we together?
    these days just pass by
    until the end of time

    i dreamt of you
    and we were holding in
    our feelings
    even in our heads
    we were never meant to be
    i smiled towards your eyes
    but even then
    we both shut down

    i'll paint you a song
    some day
    even if my blood
    stops pulsing
    i will wait here for you
    till our hearts feel depleted

    i lust for your smile
    your eyes
    and soft skin
    only to live in pain


    ”Why are you so far away? She said 'haven't you ever known that Im in love with you?' That Im in love with you.”