Let's see.... well, the eyes and ears are kinda high. Just lower them down a bit. The shoulders are too square-ish. They should slope down abit. And since this is supposed to be a skinny girl, you need to make the arms skinnier. With the hair, it doesn't look like it really connect with her....sorta looks like one of those nun hats. um...how to explain....like show more of the strands of hair....I dunno if I'm helping now. >_<
The proportions are way off, her head and shoulder area is much too big for the lower body. You can either increase the size of the lower body, or make the head and shoulders smaller. The shoulders are also too square shaped, they should slope down. Her neck could be longer, and her arms should be smaller as they get closer to the wrist. Her ears are very awkwardly placed, they're too high up and too small. The face is too spaced out, the eyes should be much smaller and the nose and mouth larger. The hair is really a mess. The way it's been colored is so streaky and looks scribbled in. When drawing things like this, keep the hair uncolored, or try smudge shading it in for a less streaky look to it. The shading on the sides of the shirt is also streaky, try smudge shading that as well.
Pretty good, but there are a lot of errors. The eyes on her look a bit high, the eyes should be in the middle of the head, no higher. The nose goes right in the middle between the eyes and the chin, and the mouthe goes between the nose and the chin. The head is also a bit big. The torso should be two heads tall. The shoulders are too high; instead of being so round, they should slope down a bit, as Eastercat said. The arms should also be skinnier. The elbows are a bit low, they should be around 2-3 inches (irl) higher than the waist. with the hair, I wouldn't use that scribble hair, it makes it look like a wig. try what you did with the bangs, just longer and flowier. I hope I helped somehow. Keep drawing, you'll improve =3.
Isn't that where the nose is? I know I've got alot of errors and I aim to fix them I drew this while playing cards last night so I didn't have time to really do anything lol
Nope, I know, a lot of people make that mistake, I think I was one of them. It doesn't look right at first, but you get used to it. If you actually print out a picture, and outline the head and eyes and stuff, you'll see.
yeah i see what you mean when i was drawing this my mom told me not to take everything to heart when i get criticism. She told me that no one is perfect and i can draw them whatever shape i want =/ but i try to prove her i can draw someone...but no one is perfect..
