Random bit of a story...

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  1. Dmaster Traverse Town Homebody

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    BLAME Deathsight44! *points at Deathsigh* he made meh feel evil and i liked-ed it! and this is what happened >D
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    A darkness silently shrouded him, his eyes shining red with hate. He hunched over staring at his white claws, an evil smile crossing his face as he felt a sharp pain rip through his back. He span around his eyes now reflecting the craze that was going inside as he laughed, feeling the hot trickle of his own blood creeping down his hand, staining his white claws. His smile widened as the man who had cut him took a step back in fear, the soldiers eyes filled with shock and fear. Silently Heiro creeped forward, the pain racking his body feeling him with joy and blocking out his senses as the man silently creeped back. He felt a sudden pull at his arm and looked to see a teenage girl clinging to him as if trying to stop him. His smile widened even further as his eyes glinted with bloodlust, silently grabbing he girl and cutting her deeply down the back, licking his blood stained claws in a dark glee. Heiro threw away the girl, his craziness making itself apparent at last as he screamed out in a blood filled scream the blood seeping from his arm wrapping around his body, as he leapt at the man who had cut him, ribbing the soldier's left arm of viciously, a now demonic smile playing on his facial features and he bit the man's lost-arm, throwing it away soon afterwards, his teeth now stained with blood. Heiro continued to creep towards he injured man, his eyes showing an uncaring blood-lust as the man begged for his life, crying out in pain as Heiro slashed at one of his eyes, ribbing it out of it's socket. Heiro's screamed in glee now, the blood once again wrapping itself around him and burning the bleeding soldier. Heiro smiled yet again at the man's face of terror and agony, biting the man deeply in the neck. The man slumped his eyes blank, as the blood-crazed Heiro screamed yet again...

    two hours later...
    Dein silently stood there, his eyes blank as his old-friend continued to rip through him, his blood splattering across the ground, covering Heiro's crazed face. Dein continued to stand there, until eventually his eyes sight had completly disaparated, falling to his knees, pain ripping his senses apart. Dein flinshed in pain as he felt deep fangs rip into his arm,the darkness now becoming a hell as he felt his childhood-friend rip him to pieces. Silently before the darkness claimed him he whispered "Heiro... why...?"

    Cian screamed in fear, his small 5 year old figure running through the now deserted village, fear blocking out his senses as he heard Heiro running behind him. Cian stumbled in fear, spinning around in terror as he watched Heiro slowly creep towards him, fear almost stopping his heart, Cian continued to crawl desperately, as the once kind-figure behind him laughed evily. Tears running down his face as he felt claws grab him, Cian screamed in pain as he felt rather than saw Heiro pulling Cian towards him...
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    >D i just made my first 100% original character kill my second and third ones... i feel so evil >D and now i remember why i want to be an author... before anyone asks, no that is not a book i am writing (though i might if people tell meh to) and if i do end up writing it that'll be the prologue anyway... oh and if you still don't realise what the point of that was it is: YOU don't make meh feel evil, or i write scary sh*t >D
     
  2. BlackKeyblade706 Destiny Islands Resident

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    OOC: :O........... That is the most scary s*** I've ever read in about five years. Dmaster, why'd you let Deathsight do this to you? You were such a nice person and you write about such horrors. ~ runs out of the thread and barfs all over redkeyblade1313's best clothes.~
     
  3. Dmaster Traverse Town Homebody

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    *laughs demonicaly* >D fear what is still to come not what is already here!
     
  4. Sir Charles of Monocles The Fault in Our Stars

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    ............................................................................................................... Oh Sh*t!!!!!!!
     
  5. Dmaster Traverse Town Homebody

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    >D mwahahahahahaha! anyways, i'm guessing that means you thought it somewhat scarey...
     
  6. Sir Charles of Monocles The Fault in Our Stars

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    No just creepy.
     
  7. Dmaster Traverse Town Homebody

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    ah... i like this version of Heiro... better than most of the ones i make...
     
  8. Sir Charles of Monocles The Fault in Our Stars

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    *backs away slowly*
     
  9. Dmaster Traverse Town Homebody

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    >D don't mess with meh when i have the kira song playing!