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Discussion in 'Archives' started by Sumi, Feb 17, 2008.

  1. Sumi suicidé

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    I think something
    Is wrong with me,
    When I look at our world
    Here's what I see:
    Hate, destruction,
    And poverty.

    Or maybe, just mabe,
    It isn't me,
    But other people!
    Here's what they see:
    Everything is always peaceful,
    No one's ever needy.

    So do you think
    Somethings wrong with me?
    Or other people,
    And what they see?
     
  2. Bianca~10~19 Moogle Assistant

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    Awesome Poem
     
  3. Dredica SNES was the best.

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    I enjoyed it, but spell maybe right xD
     
  4. Sumi suicidé

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    THanx BiBi!

    K, sorry! i dont have lotsa time!:imslow:
     
  5. Sumi suicidé

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    Thanks for the print Bianca!
     
  6. Tora-chan Traverse Town Homebody

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    Another nice poem, keep it up! And..*whisper* it's the other people!!
     
  7. Aura Goddess

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    Wow.Impressive.I liked it.You are a great poet.Continue what you are doing.
     
  8. Asterisk NO WONT LET YOU

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    The first part hooked me for sure,its a true fact for many,including me. Keep it up!
     
  9. Sumi suicidé

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    Thank you, I try really hard