I like the actual coloring on Roxas a lot, and I think you can go far with that. Still, the effects and stuff just aren't the best. :/ The smudging is nice, but the \/ flow you were trying to make just isn't working for me. Some of the little discharges need to be erased too -- they should start large and fade out into smaller pieces. Actually, do you want to make this a collab? :'D
