That's quote the improvement. I love the colors and the text placement (not to mention the stock, but coming from such a pinster, it's sort of implied). You make some good stuff~
I really like the colours in the second image, really nice and they go well with the render to. The flow of the background is also really nice too. Also, the text is pretty sweet. I really like how it fits in! Great job!
Ohh,very lovely my dear. The colours are just nomish,and everything just looks blended and put together really well. Also,the text in both seems to suit both of the different pictures,which is not an easy thing to do. Great work <3
I like the first version (of the redo) more. More color is more pleasing. It could stand to be wider, but I like the work you have done with it. Especially the text. Nice job.