The Story is a KH and Naruto Crossover, taking place while both the KH and Naruto characters are in their older versions. Preview: Riku was sitting in his bedroom, thinking of a way he could completely cleanse himself of darkness. He knew that Ansem's Darkness was still residing in his heart. "Maybe getting rid of this keyblade could help...." He thought to himself, "Sora could lend me one of his Keychains...no, that most likely wont work". He turned and looked at his clock, it read '1:43 am'. "its getting late, i should probably get some sleep". Riku crawled himself into bed and went into a deep sleep. Riku started to dream, he was in a large room, it had pillars with snake designs on it, in fact, just about everything in the room had a snake design on it. "Where am I?" Riku said to himself "My Lair" an ominous voice said from nowhere. Then Riku noticed that someone was standong over in the corner, the person stepped out from the shadow and revealed himself. He was tall, had long black hair, his skin white as snow, a purple belt-thing that twisted behind him. Riku stood up and drew his keyblade "Who are you?" Riku asked " I am Orochimaru, and I know how to rid you of your Darkness" he said. Hope you enjoyed the small preview i posted here, ill try to get the first chapter up soon. :)
If you're going to post a preview/prologue, atleast make it long enough- you may aswell have named this as the first chapter. Try not to start every action sentence with "Riku did this" or "Riku did that". Have some variation. Also, set out your work in more than one paragraph! Blocks of text arent appealing to the eye. Has the potential to be good, though.
