I thought it would be nice to post my poetry on here, and hear everyone's opinion. Be sure to let me know your opinions/advice, and I hope you all enjoy them! :)[DOUBLEPOST=1401249308][/DOUBLEPOST]Death of Society To rise from the deep darkened mass grave of sanity Ascending from cold silent entrenched depravity Note below, the faction And so analyze their peculiar reaction Once so humane and apathetic, now interested and hostile at best As one would gaze down, dejected more or less Can they not see? So ever clearly? The earth that keeps filling in? They who are shrouded in their dense stupor of ignorance So contented! Their eyes staring intense Pointing their fingers, they call it insanity Detesting the alternative with sobriety Ignorant are the sane, for clarity is ever so frequently misconstrued Taken for lunacy, the comprehension subdued (This first one is a little short.)
First thing, If this thread is just for poetry, it should get moved to the Poetry/Lyrics section. Cat~'s the main mod for this section so you can ask her to move it. Second, I liked it. I've always been a bit of a fan of the more morbid poetry, and the ones that are very detail oriented, comparing everything to colors and lights and sounds, all that jazz. Personally, I'm not a big fan of rhyming, but I think you did it fairly well. So bravo to that. Can't wait to see what else you post. :]
