Poetic stories by YukiSaxor

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  1. YukiSaxor Destiny Islands Resident

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    I didn't just want to put down poems. Its probably not even poems but I was told it was freewrite. Anyway its sorted into categories.

    Romance/Tragedy


    Fire and Water

    Two enemies
    One water
    One Fire
    Who become one
    Within the midist of war.

    They know its dangerous
    They know they will die sooner or later

    Though they continue to walk through the fire storm.
    Bombs burst
    And light flashes before their eyes
    Metal burns and melts with flesh which once were friends.

    Within their metal skins
    They shoot pelts of metal
    Throw balls of fire
    And watch with tinges of despair
    As comrades of loved ones
    Are burned to death.

    And secretly at night
    With stars and moon as witness
    She cools him down
    As he warms her up.

    Hearing fire shots from friends
    Who at first knew but played pretend
    Hoping to put the one their friend's love to an end

    Though both sides
    with too much cold
    Or too much warmth
    Misfire their guns
    And hits the other group

    Others of each side
    Hear the sounds
    And a battle soon unfolds

    While the earth hails
    They try to yell
    Try to stop the fight
    Unable to.

    Water cries.
    Feeling no hope
    That peace is impossible.
    That there's no way.

    The two take out their guns
    From the folds of the clothes
    Remebering the day when it all began.

    Sitting in sand of an old cave.
    Lost from each others group.
    Meeting in a cave
    Where both thought no one laid.
    Staying together
    Until visited by a local
    Who got them out
    Then they split.
    With a final Kiss

    The neutral (local) seen.
    Seen the love in between
    who knew well of the war scene
    They then hoped to put them together
    Keeping them there so it can start some peace.
    Tricking them to think he can make a dream come true
    Having them write letters to each other
    Then actually sending them.

    Now here we are in present day.
    The couple on the ground the lay
    With guns in one hand pointing at the other
    Hand holding in hand with another.
    With a final breath
    Speaks of love
    Then they shoot.

    No one even pays them mind
    Until the war is far behind
    Then a grave dug up in that spot
    Where they were buried.
    And on one part of the stone say
    Here is where the two war lover's lay.


    The spirit in the mansion

    This can be found in booksie. Technically this is sort of fanfic and sort of not. What I did was one day I thought what if I can take different clips from a movie and turn it into a whole new story. Well I did that with Disney's Haunted Mansion starring Eddie Murphy and this is the story I got.
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    I'd been trapped in this mansion for many many years.
    Waiting for someone to bring my second piece.
    I was a very beautiful girl, who had a lover.
    Then one night at a ball, celebrating our engagement.
    We had invited our friends and servants to join in a dance.
    It was my idea to wear a mask.
    I still remeber it so clearly...

    Though sadly, envy was in that Lover's shadow.
    And that envy turned to me.
    Envy looked me straight in the eye.
    Envy gave me a welcoming smile.
    It was envy who gave me a golden cup.
    Golden cup full of death.
    As my last breath gave I saw Envy turned into death!
    Smiling as I died!
    The last thing I heard, was "He's mine. He was mine before you came!"

    My spirit cried.
    Envy had a Homo love. Homo as in the same.

    My love found me dead.
    With poison in my hand!
    And a note that said I was in plot which I couldn't take anymore, cause I would be hurting him.
    And that my love for him was fake!
    Envy! Envy pretended like he griefed after me.
    My dear love couldn't take my death anymore, so he killed himself.
    Envy cried and shouted and became a servant of dark.
    He sold his soul so he could save my dear love, but in order to save him...
    He had to get a second part of me and give her to my dear love.
    He had to marry them and kill my second piece, for if that happens.
    My dear love would be saved.
    My love was trapped in the same mansion as I, but he came back as a ghost.

    He knew that I must've not been whole when I died.
    Cause the mansion I was trapped in, his familie's mansion.
    His a soul sucker. It traps the souls that die in it.
    And they do not leave, until one can find light.

    One day Envy invited my second piece to the mansion.
    This girl looked excatly like me.
    This girl...had children and a husband!
    As I watched I wondered if Envy will truly go through with this.
    But when my lover had invited her to dinner and Envy, with his back turned smiled wickedly.
    I knew...I knew he was going to do it!
    So in order to save my second piece, I went after her children.
    I lead them to a clue which could help them found out Envy's plans.

    They soon ran into my lover's servants, the most loyal servants!
    And they told them everything, well execpt for the parts only I know.
    Like that I killed myself! And with poison!
    Then Envy came.
    Envy and my Lover never knew I was here all along! My presence is invisble.
    They can not feel me here.
    Envy looked at loyal servants, knowing that they told.

    Later, the father found the fortune teller.
    Who told her fortune of something dark being defeated..
    A place where things are stored. A place where a light once lived.
    How it all began. A place where shells are kept. Under a bridge will be very
    murky and under it must be at least 40. But one is all you need. One that has
    the key! Then you'll need to find a place where the past gathers around.

    The fortune teller being the way she always was began to fright him and send instruments after her.

    The father was then told of Envy's plans by the same servants.
    Father told them of the fortune he was given.
    The servants then realized what it was, something that could stop Envy.
    They then went on a quest, figuring out that they must go to a box in my old room.
    There, they found a key.
    They then went to the masoluem and found another key.
    And after that went to an attic and looked around until they found a box filled with my stuff.
    They then found a letter, the letter I was planning to give to him before we wed.
    They then planned to show it to my love.
    But before they could, they were then split.
    Envy found out their plans!
    He trapped the kids and the man.


    As he did that, he...I couldn't believe it!
    He tricked my look alike to be in my wedding dress.
    Then told her that there was going to be a traditonal ceremony.
    I wanted to throw my heel at his head!
    Traditonal ceremony alright! Ceremony of marriage!

    Knowing that I had no time to waste as Envy prepared the "ceremony"
    I then went to the kids first.
    They were locked in a trunk being guarded by haunted armor.
    In a hallway that had the door behind the trunk locked.
    Within the trunk, the children were moving a lot.
    The trunk swayed and swayed and swayed.
    I went to them and pushed with all my might.
    The trunk fell and started to roll.
    The guards stayed still as the trunk did this.
    Then the children came tumbling out.
    The quickly stood to their feet and the guards still stayed still.
    The girl suggested that they ran fast, which they did.
    As they did, the guards started to move and tried to slice, dice, cut them.
    Luckily they made it out alive and started running down another hallway.
    I then lead them to their father.

    Their father was trapped behind a locked door.
    I knew this.
    So I lead the kids to my old room to get a key from a music box.
    This they did.
    I then lead them to where their father was and the girl opened the door.
    They then both got hugged by their father.
    The father with my letter in his hand decided to show it to my lover.

    They ran through the mansion but didn't make it in time.
    To tell my look alike about what's going to happen.
    They saw my lover asking if she remebered him.
    As if I was her, but I wasn't.
    I wanted to yell out that she wasn't, but couldn't.
    My words are mute from the poison.
    Envy then took out a cup of poison and handed it to her.
    Now my lover, being the way he was, wanted to kill him.
    But the husband got him to listen and to read my letter.
    My lover reads it as Envy is shocked.
    My love then asks Envy what was going on.
    Look alike husband said he killed me.
    My love was shocked and asked if it was true.

    Envy got upset and then, my goodness!!
    The underworld appeared!
    I couldn't believe it.
    He then revealed his plans and was in fury.
    And then was getting sucked in the portal of the underworld.
    He tried to drag the husband down with him, but husband escaped.

    My love was now upset.
    While the family embraced each other.
    I came up to my look alike and took over her body.
    I talked to my love, who's eyes were now fully of suprise and happiness.
    He realized it was me.
    We kissed and then I came out of my look alike's body and passed on with my love.
    And his servants...

    Tears of marriage

    My world
    Collapsing
    Over just a few words.

    Arranged marriage
    Arranged Marriage

    Many believe that I'm so lucky
    But I have no freedom
    I'm in a cage with chains.

    I want to be free!

    I can't even cry tears
    of my own pain.
    I feel like I'm drowning.

    Smiling a fake smile.
    As my lips are colored red
    My cheeks a beautiful red.

    Veil over my head
    Veil over my head

    I hear a familar voice of love.
    I can hear it come from my tree.

    "You can cry tears now.
    As you walk down that aisle.
    It'll be mistaken as tears of joy.
    So let the pain out.
    Release it all."

    Strong wind blows petals to my lap
    From my beloved tree.
    Oh my loving tree filled with memories.

    Looking back I wish time slowed.
    Enjoying those sweet memories.

    I wish we were all encased in ice.
    So we wouldn't move
    From that very spot.

    So we have no worries.
    And forget our places.
    I loved forgetting what I am.
    When I'm with you.

    And now...
    Once I'm married.
    They'll cut cut down that tree.
    So filled with memories.
    I feel like once it goes down
    I will fade.
    I will die.
    But maybe this is just a wish
    So I can be with you forever.

    And only I know
    Of sins that have been comitted.

    Of murder, of lies, betrayl and torture.
    I don't blame you for your actions.
    I blame myself for not realizing it earlier.
    If only I could...

    Tears falling down my cheek.
    The pain has overflowed
    My boundaries.

    Fire burns through my memories
    It shines so brightly against snow.
    I run on the porch so fast
    In the distance I see it.
    The fire burning.

    I remeber your words.
    I'll be the woods.

    Not caring what cloth tears from me.
    I'm stained with ashes.
    My lungs filled with smoke.
    I continue on knowing danger.

    I walk within the cave.
    And there I see in a haunting violet.
    You and your mirror image.
    Lay down on the cold stone.

    I run to you.
    Grab your icy hand.
    Your eyes closed.
    You open them so slowly.

    I could feel it was the end.

    You smiled sweetly.
    And told me I was not in blame.
    I shouldn't blame myself.
    For falling in love.
    Even with a monster.

    But you are not the monster.

    The true monster is one I'm marrying.
    With everlasting vows.
    He's the one who did the first blow
    Of pure envy, pure power.

    Torturing your mirror
    Making web of lies.
    Creating your betrayl
    Creating your murder.

    And now the drums play
    I should be leaving
    But I'm glued here.

    Steampunk

    Mary had Steam (INCOMPLETE)
    First time writing steampunk. So I recommned this to anyone who already knows what a steampunk world looks like because theres like no description in here.

    There once was a girl named Mariyln
    She had brown skin, Hazel eyes and black hair.
    She lived on the streets for most of her life
    She was a unique human
    Able to change her face.

    Then one day a truck full of men came
    Steam filled the streets when it stopped
    They held a sketch of Mariyln and asked around

    She immdiately ran and went to a friend
    Who gave her a gun to protect herself
    They told her they will call someone.
    And they will take care of her.
    Giving her an address

    Mariyln then began to run
    Until she stopped and used her gun
    She stopped when the men took out big guns
    She then ran into the crowd
    Fell down
    Then changed her appearance.

    She went to the someone's house
    And saw a young man her age.
    And then a old man soon after.
    Who is her friend's friend.
    While the young man is his apprentince.

    He tells her she's an experiment
    Born in tubes
    By a scientist and his dead wife
    Made with organic and artifical ingredients
    Which is the reason why she can shift
    The men are after her for a reason
    One of the ingredients she was made with
    Is needed to power a huge steam machine
    A machine with a lot of power
    In the past it caused a lot of destruction.
    It was then put out of power
    The power source taken and hidden away.

    At first Mariyln did not believe.
    Until the men came to the house.
    Mariyln hid in a hidden closet
    The men searched and searched
    And Mariyln overheard them talking.
    The old man was right.
    His story true.
    The men wanted her for one thing only.
    For that ingredient in her body.

    Once they left
    Mariyln gave the old man thanks.
    Before leaving
    And asking him to thank her friend too.
    She'll be going away and will come back in the future.
    The old man stopped her before she left
    And insisted she took his car.
    Mariyln at first deject
    But after awhile she learn the man will not forget.
    She took the car and drove far
    Before she saw something move in the back.
    She demanded who are you
    And got a shifting noise.
    A young man her age sat up.
    She asked didn't she just see him
    He replies with a no
    And that she must've seen his twin.

    She asks what he is doing
    He replies sleeping
    He asks what she is doing
    She replies running.
    He looks at her then laughs.
    And asks her again
    Mariyln glares at him.
    And the guy realizes he's in trouble.
    He asks if she is kidnapping him to get her way
    And if she is then to him its okay

    She says she's not robber
    Not a criminal
    But just a victimn wanted for her body.
    The guy blushes as he smiles a bit.
    "Your body eh?" He says
    "Must be pretty good."
    Mary is not pleased.
    "I'll stop as soon as I can.
    Then you can go back to that old man."
    "Aw, what a horrible plan.
    Your much more pretty that a wrinkly man
    Can't I stay here a bit longer?"