yay! i love writing poems! most of mine don't make sense though... hope you like them anyway! P.S. i don't know where ANY of these even come from... So lonely is the night When the stars aren't shining Darkness turned them out one by one The shadows have begun But a new light is rising She danced in darkness Apart from the world weeping lonely heartbroken He came to her slowly Whispered,"Can't keep my eyes off of you." blushing butterflies love He filled her room With dazzling light sparkling luminous warm They both ran from dark dancing in light happy joyful bliss Hear it coming Hear it creeping You can't see it But you know It's there It rears It's head You see It's eyes Cold and glowing Panic strikes you You close your eyes Feel yourself falling Hear the beast moaning Right in your ear
I don't write poems myself, but I can read them. They are pretty potic the only thing is that some of them don't ryhme. Well they don't have to so =P. Good job I guess.
Those are great poems. They are all very atmospheric. The last one is slightly scary. Keep writing. You have real talent.
