This Particular Poem has to be about someone we can describe.. I'm chosing a guy who is as close to my heart as any other. Jared <3 When i see his Tall cool laid back self I smile at the thought of listening to his soft gently voice. I examine his soft curly brownish bronze hair, bouncing in wonderful damp curls. And his tempting smile making me weak at my knees Yet his ethereal and divine deep laugh looses me in my heart. His dark brown eyes are a sea of dark pools, waiting to be explored. Sadness and worry change his eyes, and they become a lighter, more sad sense of despair. His crinkled nose makes me giggle and titter with a wave of felicity. His warm delicate fingers intertwined with mine makes my day end in a great smile. and I shall soon miss his light tame, breeze aroma filling in my lings as I breathe in his lovely scent as we embrace in a gentle hug, and I am lost in a faint sea of beautiful rapture
I liked it a lot. I'm huge fan of these kind of poems that have a nice line pattern. Your adjectives are amazing and the description is really lovely.
