Poem of Seasons

here it is, I just finished it.

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Winter is my favourite time of the year,
With snowing, and laughing, and Christmas, good cheer.
Foods all aplenty, and there’s good times galore,
Winter is definitely never a bore.

Then on to spring with the life that begins,
All of the new creatures, my head nearly spins.
And flowers, oh flowers, of all colour and sprite,
Finally, the days are starting to get light.

Then on to the oven of summer, oh mercy,
The baking heat, even here in the UK you see.
Most people go on Holiday to France or to Spain,
And some, they stay here to lap up the rain!

And then on to autumn when all of the trees,
Are beginning to get tired and are falling to their knees,
Because of the gales and the thunder so fast,
(And school), In my scale, this “autumn” is last.

And then over again like a wheel of fortune,
Again soon the spring will sing its merry tune,
And then on to summer then autumn and winter,
Now my poem is done it is off to the printer.

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Please CnC and tell me, am I a good poet?

 

Wow, that is good...the rhyming, the length, the choice of words...it's really awesome! XD Although in the verse of "Winter is definitely, never a bore" it'd sound better without a comma, since it kind of makes the reader pause. Otherwise, you did awesome...:) So is this the first poem you ever written?

 

wow the ryhming and length were great - and it was quite true

 

The lenght was good and the poem was pretty good.

 

thnx, yea my first poem, also I am glad that none of you picked up on the fact that I called winter a month which I have now changed to time. also I have edited the comma out.

 

I love your choice of words here. It's a really great poem. Maybe you should go in depth and write a poem about each of the seasons? I'd like to see that. Good job.
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something else. This was totally off the top of my head. The last rhyme was with the help of a rhiming dictionary.