Peeling the Mask(Unfinished)

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  1. Sadden Blood Warrior Lost in the mind! Help help me god!!!!! Their afte

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    Ok here's a song I've been working on... It's not finished so when I finish it I'll post it...

    Anyways, here's what I have right now...

    <Beginning>
    (Tick tock tick tock tick tock)
    (Woman screams)
    (HELP ME GOD!)
    (Crying)
    (NO NO STOP)
    (Chainsaw starts up)
    (NOOOOOOO!)
    Mwahahahaha!
    <Verse one>
    Do you...
    Do you think I'm a freak
    (Can you see me?)
    No you can't!
    My Face is hidding...
    In the dark!
    (Can you feel me breathing)
    The broken sharded mask
    Hids the uglyness
    (But you can tell I'm a monster)
    So what to do...
    What should I do
    (Screams)
    <Chorus>
    Nothings changed
    With me
    Taking a knife
    And peeling my mask
    Blood starts to drip
    Now you shall see
    My real face
    and feel death!



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    All I got so far...
    So anygood?
     
  2. khhottie30 Twilight Town Denizen

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    Wow...that song...is the shizz.

    I like it!
     
  3. Sadden Blood Warrior Lost in the mind! Help help me god!!!!! Their afte

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    Thanks lol.....
     
  4. khhottie30 Twilight Town Denizen

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    Hey, you better reply to my song!