Path of Darkness

i have a story i have been doing it isent great but it is ok and i would like to know what you think i have put a a best bit i think under this CHAPTER 10: WELCOMED BY A SPIDER

The trip to the person’s place that Fire Fox was going on about was long and Robert was heavy and drooling.
“We are here at last, the cave of the legendary Mama J leeâ€
“So who is she Fire Fox�
“She is the person that gave me my powers. What happened was, that I was starving, I was rubbish at hunting and the food I did get Tom nicked, that is why I wonted you to kill him you see, and she took pity on me and gave me the powers I have, she used an magical native American ceremony to give me the power to transform into animals and ever since then I have gone to her with my problemsâ€
And with that Fire Fox showed them the entrance of the cave that has dream catchers out side and a totem poll to the right and beckoned them in.
“Cough sniff that stupid pot, it is getting harder and harder to keep people away these daysâ€
“Hello Mama J lee I have a favour to ask youâ€
“That boy all ways have a favour to ask, that is the last time I save anyone’s life†Mama J lee whispered under her breath
“What was that, I could not hear you?â€
“I, I said that it is good to see youâ€
“A friend of mine is injured can you help him outâ€
“Hello Mama J lee, how are you Mama J lee, nice to see you Mama J lee. It is all ways about him, for ones I would like him to say hello before asking for something†Mama J lee whispered under her breath again
“Ok bring him inside and I will be there in a secondâ€
Mitchell dragged Robert into the cave while he was still under the sleeping spell and still drooling.
“Ok put him on the table and lay him on his stomach†Mama J lee runs here fingers down his back and then she stops, with her index and her middle finger she pushed her fingers in his back CRACK!
“That sounded like it hurt†Cody said cringing
“He will be fine in a day or to, I will let you rest hear for a night if you wont. I have had a falling ou with the pot so be careful at 12 it likes to hid thingsâ€