Paradise Lost: Corrupted World

OK, so here's the story. There's a group of elite mage/knights that ride dragons who have been stranded on an island and ten kilometers long..... For six years.Eventually they escape to find their military diminished, and the main enemy, Katchress, dead. Only problem with that is, Katchress was a fool. Now his son, a tactical genious and infinitely evil man, has taken over. The knights now must face extinction to save Amoir, the land of Paradise (hence the name, Paradise Lost: Corrupted World.) There are two other lands. The Land of Hell, Kargo, and The Land of Earth (as in in between), Y'dar. Kargo is the homeland of Katchress and his son. Y'dar has simply given in. They werenot meant for battle. Soon the knights realize that the only hope is to recruit new knights that are meant to ride dragons.....
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rules: you can be a Kargo Demon (that's what they call their knights), a Amoir knight, or a Y'dar rogue (a Y'dar that escaped and realized that they have to fight to live. Kargo Demons have demon wings, Amoir knights have angel wings, and Y'dar people have a tail....
other rules:
no power-playing ( not giving other person time to react)
no god moding ( you should know what that means)
limit of four characters
Amoir have limited use of your wings...... that's why you have a dragon.
Kargo have unlimited flight on their wings. they have no dragons....
Y'dar can run unlimitedly fast and can jump extremely high, to make up for no dragons OR wings.....
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OC form:
Name:
Age (has to be at least 10) :
appearence:
time recruited (before the island or after):
dragon (element and name ex:white dragon, sky element) :
weapon:
Kargo, Amoir, or Y'dar?:
theme song: (optional)
additional info: (history etc.
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mine:
Name: Chase
age: 18 (nearly 19)
appearence: (ignore the kunai knife) (plus angel wings....)
time recruited: before the island
dragon:black and white dragon, twilight
weapon:
Kargo, Amoir, or Y'dar?: Amoir
theme song: Numb by linkin park and temporarily Crawling by Linkin Park
additional info: has been left in his fathers shadows his whole life.( hence Numb as his theme song). he's practically half Kargo demon half Amoir knight. His father was a Kargo demon and his mother was a Amoir knight. His mother was able to save him from being a Kargo demon, but it's still in his blood. Now his father is alive, his mother not. Recently his father has given him the chance of living as part of Kargo. His father is second in command in the Kargo military. Now he must take his choice.

other people's OC list:

Name: Silico Raven Suzuki
Age : 15
appearence:http://i241.photobucket.com/albums/f...airedAngel.jpg
time recruited: after
dragon: Black Dragon - darkness
weapon: http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p...nry/broad1.jpg
Kargo, Amoir, or Y'dar?: Amoir
theme song: Kryptonite by Three Doors Down
additional info: N/A (will be revealed in story)

Name: Erin
Age (has to be at least 10) : 16
appearence: http://photobucket.com/mediadetail/?...&pageOffset=18
time recruited (before the island or after): before (changed it for you, Dinesty)
dragon (element and name ex:white dragon, sky element) : Zharo, black with blue highlights and golde eyes
weapon: long sword
Kargo, Amoir, or Y'dar?: Amori
theme song: (optional)
additional info: (history etc.

Name: Anna
Age (has to be at least 10) : 13
appearence: http://photobucket.com/mediadetail/?...&pageOffset=10
time recruited (before the island or after): After
dragon (element and name ex:white dragon, sky element) : Zahara red with sky blue eyes
weapon: bow and arows
Kargo, Amoir, or Y'dar?: Amoir
theme song: (optional)
additional info: (history etc.)

Name: Geryl
Age: 18
appearence:
time recruited: before
weapon: 4 swords and daggers
Kargo, Amoir, or Y'dar?: Y'dar
additional info: Has been in the army for ten years and followed orders.

Name: Karin
Age (has to be at least 10) :16
appearence:siggy
time recruited (before the island or after):after
dragon (element and name ex:white dragon, sky element) : Darkness, Sharun the dark dragon.
weapon:shadows fear
IMG]http://www.epic-fantasy.com/images/swords/swordoffreedom[/IMG]

Kargo, Amoir, or Y'dar?:Amoir

Name: Jake
Age (has to be at least 10) : 16
appearance:
time recruited (before the island or after): He's Kargo
dragon (element and name ex:white dragon, sky element) : He's Kargo
weapon: (he mainly uses magic, making the swords levitate
Kargo, Amoir, or Y'dar?: Kargo
theme song: (optional) One Step Closer by Linkin Park
additional info: (history etc. Best friend of Chase
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examples (I'll post a Y'dar as soon as I find one....):
example of a Kargo Demon:


unarmored Amoir knight:

~Y'dar with dog ears and armor
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Journal Log:
-All of the Amoir retrieve their dragons, after getting attacked by Kargo.
-Chase tells everyone to go ahead, determined to kill his dad
-Chase gets Captured and attacks the others, his Kargo side being dominant
-He regains control, telling Raven and Geryl to go for fear of hurting them or getting them hurt more
-Raven and Geryl return to find a near-death Chase with Jake about to deliver a finishing bloe
-Jake engages in battle with Raven, then Geryl.
-Jake is defeated by Chase using special transformations that he's never used before in battle, revealing that he does not know the consequences of the second opening.
-He goes after his dragon
-He's attacked by unknown enemies ( The Baramut, a new race)
-He tells what they are.

 

Name: Karin
Age (has to be at least 10) :16
appearence:siggy
time recruited (before the island or after):after
dragon (element and name ex:white dragon, sky element) : Darkness, Sharun the dark dragon.
weapon:shadows fear
IMG]http://www.epic-fantasy.com/images/swords/swordoffreedom[/IMG]

Kargo, Amoir, or Y'dar?:Amoir

 

Name: Silico Raven Suzuki
Age : 15
appearence:http://i241.photobucket.com/albums/ff66/xpotatochipx/Anime/BlackHairedAngel.jpg
time recruited: after
dragon: Black Dragon - darkness
weapon: http://i127.photobucket.com/albums/p145/SillyxChicken/Weaponry/broad1.jpg
Kargo, Amoir, or Y'dar?: Amoir
theme song: Kryptonite by Three Doors Down
additional info: N/A (will be revealed in story)

 

good news and bad news....
good:

entered!

bad:

sorry to say but this ain't got anything to do with KH.... you're not gonna be able to have keyblades....

other: we can start after Final fixes his profile and we have at least one person except me that was a rider before the island.....

 

Name: Erin
Age (has to be at least 10) : 16
appearence: http://photobucket.com/mediadetail/....jpg&searchTerm=anime angel boy&pageOffset=18
time recruited (before the island or after): b4
dragon (element and name ex:white dragon, sky element) : Zharo, black with blue highlights and golde eyes
weapon: long sword
Kargo, Amoir, or Y'dar?: Amori
theme song: (optional)
additional info: (history etc.

Name: Anna
Age (has to be at least 10) : 13
appearence: http://photobucket.com/mediadetail/...jpg&searchTerm=anime angel girl&pageOffset=10
time recruited (before the island or after): After
dragon (element and name ex:white dragon, sky element) : Zahara red with sky blue eyes
weapon: bow and arows
Kargo, Amoir, or Y'dar?: Amoir
theme song: (optional)
additional info: (history etc.)

 

yo yo yo! ok you're in...... one thing is that you gotta put your history! sorry!

 

they will be revield in story

 

OOC: you're in then! you wanna have one of your chars be from before the island, tho? please???

 

fine...which do u want to be b4?

 

OOC: either's ok! we only need one more from before to start.... including the one you are gonna make from before.... that means that we can start once you choose....

 

ooc: i gess Erin

 

OOC: change it then. I'll add it after that.................................................

 

I'll join.

Name: Geryl
Age: 18
appearence:
time recruited: before
weapon: 4 swords and daggers
Kargo, Amoir, or Y'dar?: Y'dar
additional info: Has been in the army for ten years and followed orders.

 

ummm sorry but I g2g

 

OOC: for one, Y'dar doesn't have a former military except the rogues..... Two, none of them have dragons..... read the last rule.....

OOC: and cya Dinesty!

 

OOC: Edited it.

 

OOC: it's good now.... I'll randomly start.... I'll just update a log whenever something new happens.....

BIC: Zach could feel the air rippling around him as he fell, trying to control his flight without using his wings. " Everyone, get ready to open up your wings!" His dragon was down there somewhere......

 

OOC: Where are the Y'dars at now?

 

ooc: anyone on?

 

OOC: me.... And all the Y'dar rouges are with the dragons of the Amoir..... The Y'dar are keeping them safe....