Painful Heart

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  1. Laplace TSUKI NO SHIHAI

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    This pain in my chest
    Is kills my heart
    It breaks me from the inside
    I can´t handle it anymore

    Is like I was hollow
    If I haven´t emotions
    I deserve this
    The pain is going to end killing me

    What I have to do to get rid of it
    I have to kill me!?
    I have to die to get rid of the pain
    Then so be it

    What is this pain in my heart?
    What is happening to me?
    I can´t handle this anymore
    I have to get rid of this now

    I try again and again
    But it never goes away
    Is just killing me
    It will end making me sick

    I can handle this anymore
    I have to get rid of this now
    I can´t get rid of this
    I think I will end dying
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    THIS is the reason of my depression, a pain in my chest I been having for weeks, I just... Can´t handle it anymore, is killing me little by little (In the emotional way), is making me completely sick.
     
  2. O R A N G E C is the heavenly option

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    This is amazing!

    I love your poems, Chaser007. They're so meaningful and have a lot of depth. Even if they are talking about something sad you still wind up pulling them off. Great Job!

    I give you five stars! XD

    PS: Check your reputation. :3

     
  3. Laplace TSUKI NO SHIHAI

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    Actually I write this one in like 5-15 minutes or so, I write all of them very quick, and I don´t know how I do it O_O.
     
  4. O R A N G E C is the heavenly option

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    Well quick doesn't necessarily mean bad or depthless. If you're really strongly feeling some emotion than you probably would write about them quickly.

    Still good job all the same.

     
  5. Nymph of Destiny Chaser

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    lol I write mines pretty quick myself. XD

    But anyhow, this is a nice poem. :) *hugs*
     
  6. Laplace TSUKI NO SHIHAI

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    *Hugs back* Thanks ^^.
     
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