Traditional Art Original Character

Discussion in 'Arts & Graphics' started by Ravenyuki, Aug 14, 2009.

  1. Ravenyuki Traverse Town Homebody

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    This is Raven. An original chrarcter from my fanfic keyblader Chronicle. I took a photo of it and edited the background in Gimp.

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    Critique, comment, etc.
     
  2. Princess Luna Supreme Co-Ruler of Equestria

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    LOL, looks kind of like Amby.

    But her boobs are a little off and her shoulder plus torso looks too square. The arms are quite skinny and hands are too small. That gives the impression that she's kind of fat, compared to the arms. Basically, a wee lesson on body proportions may do you some good.
     
  3. Ravenyuki Traverse Town Homebody

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    I know about body proportions, but I don't always get them perfect. (No, that is not Amby.) This character was made to look like me. She usually wears glasses, though. I'll try to post pictures of the other characters soon.
     
  4. Xephos Neko, gamer, animelover, and artist :3 *purrs*

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    Oooh. Not bad. ^^ *purrs* I do see a lack of shading there so try it. ^^

    Plus the left arm seems like very small. I don't know. Like a T rex. Try enlarging it.

    Not bad though. ^^
     
  5. Kites Chaser

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    It's really good, just try to make the hand that's waving look like her palm is face-front not the back of her hand. Also, if you try making the background in GIMP, use different layers so it doesn't get in the way of the actual drawing. Good job though. :3
     
  6. Xaale Sylph of Hope

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    Not too bad, much better than how I draw people, but still I think you should work on human anatomy more. Some things are off a little bit, like the hands.

    Not bad c: