these are some pictures of my character Jecht that im making a story for http://www.kh-vids.net/picture.php?albumid=19&pictureid=2871 http://www.kh-vids.net/picture.php?albumid=19&pictureid=2870 http://www.kh-vids.net/picture.php?albumid=19&pictureid=2867 http://www.kh-vids.net/picture.php?albumid=19&pictureid=2866 http://www.kh-vids.net/picture.php?albumid=19&pictureid=978 what do you think?
not bad. the shoulders seem too wide for the body, so try to work on your proportions. same thing with the hands. other than that, it's good. a good thing to do to try and get your proportions right is to draw some lines and basic shapes as a sort of skeleton to build around.
I like your style. But the shoulders and way to wide. Your upper proportions are way off. Maybe some armor? But anyways, I like the detail on his pants, but you should make your cloths flow more. His upper body.. looks really stiff. But other then that, it's really cute, and you should keep up the good work! :3
The hands are a bit small along with the arms, but overall you did a pretty good job with the clothes. 8/10
The pictures resemble Final Fantasy and Naruto characters to me. No offense. The one you posted reminds me of Cloud's clothes, but that's just from memory. The whole scar thing is cliché', you might want to get rid of that. If you're designing characters for a novel, try to make them look more realistic, not so much anime like, but if you're making a magna, go for the anime style. Those are just my opinions. 4/10.
first he looks nothing like cloud second the scar is essential its his thing you see that mark on the first one it came from the scar without it he isn't my guy 3rd yes i am going to make a manga for him i even have story ready so you be quite to everyone else thanks and im fixing the parts you mentioned
Totally nothing like Cloud's sleeves. The only difference I see with the sleeves is the fact that the shoulder armor thing is on the right shoulder without a sleeve on the arm. Then the sleeveless arm doesn't have the shoulder armor thing. No resemblance at all :\
