Original Character/Fan character CONTEST

Okay! Contest for Anyone who has an OC. (Original Character).

The Due date is . . . Hmm, May 15th for now.

You will be judged on . . .
- Originality
- Personality
- Believability
- Story
- Least like "Mary Sue"


- Originality:
My tip is try something different. Not everybody needs a keyblade!

- Personality:
My tip on this is it helps to have a very strong personality! It's the key part of the character! Spend less time on the characters Weapon, and more time on if the guy is shy, or if the girl has an obsession over guys.

- Believiblity:
I'm sorry, it's hard to believe someone can fly, and have super strength, and control every Element, AND change into an animal!
Also, the believibility with the story connecting with the character. If they live in Twilight town, and they grow up as a pampered child, most likely they aren't going to know how to fight right off the bat. If they grew up in a rugged world, where you have to fight for your life, most likely they are not going to be afraid of heartless. If you know what I mean . . .

- Story:
Let me just say, if they have a strong story, an Interesting story, (An ORIGINAL story,) It would help the character. Also the connection with the story and the personality, (Look up to "Believiblity")

- Mary Sue/Gary Stu
Mary Sue, Gary Stu is NOT a good thing about 99% of the time. Exspecailly not in this contest. If you don't know what it is,Wikipedia Article

or if you want to see if yours is a Mary Sue/Gary Stu
Quiz


Fill in at least these:

Name:
Gender:
Age:
Full History:
Personality:
Weapon:
Abilities:
Other:

And if anyone wants to help me judge, pm me, or post it here!

There will be no prize, unless if someone wants to donate a prize . . .
All I can give is attempts of MS Paint siggies.

 

I guess I'll try it...this is one of the characters from my story Ability (and its sequel)

Name: Elizabeth

Gender: Female

Age: 22 in Ability, but 23 in the sequel

Full History: She was brought up in a small town in the South, where her family owned a peach farm. She often has difficult deciding whether she enjoyed her time there or not, as she recalls having several brothers and sisters and her family constantly having economic trouble due to rising and falling peach prices. By the time the story takes place, she has already gone through college and works at a laboratory in Paris, working on a computer that reportedly has valuable information on "Nobodies," a strange race that nobody on Earth knows much about. When her research subject, Zexion, manages to outsmart her, she is taken to The World That Never Was to cause more trouble than they'd ever thought possible.

Personality: She's defiant and sometimes rude, even though she knows her actions aren't always in her best interest. Causing trouble is her life's goal...

Weapon: None.

Abilities: She's clever, but that doesn't help her much...

Other: She despises Nobodies...but she occasionally finds herself feeling sympathetic.


Alrighty then, there ya go!

 

(If you read my fanfic, this is NOT her. I sorta have two different Kikis, but they're basicly almost the same)

Name:Kiki

Gender:female

Age:10 or 12 (matters if I'm in the mood to RP her really young or just young)

Full History: Kiki lives and was raised in the Disney Castle, even though she was a human. Everyone at the castle was her family. At about 8 she used to follow Donald alot cause she loved the magic the mage could do. Since then, she had been an apprentice to Donald. She had been looking for Donald and Goofy ever since they left the castle, unexpectedly.
In her past, Kiki's parents were killed by heartless when she was about 2 years old. King Mickey, who was trying to fight the heartless at the time, rescued her.

Personality: Really polite, helpful, determined, outgoing, childish, loyal,

Weapon:a grey rod that retracts

Abilities: Magic spells like Fire, Blizzard, Thunder, and Cure.

Other: Since she is still an apprentice, her magic skills are not the best. She only knows about heartless, not nobodies. She also has a fear of ghost. O_O

You know...shouldn't we have appearence as a category?

 

Ok here's mine.

Name : Cho (Dawn)

Gender : Female

Age : 15

Full History : Cho's mother disappeared when she was five years old and she hasn't seen her since. She was raised by her mother's friend and her sister Aunt Jitsu(Kindness) and Aunt Suki(Love). When she was seven her father, Koufu(Worker) was found and he returned to live with her and her aunts until she was fourteen, when he mysteriously disappeared. When she turned fifteen, she decided she had to find him after getting a strange message in a bottle. Thus her journey began...

Personality : Kind, sort of motherly to those younger than her. When irritated or angered, she can be a spitfire.

Weapon : Ornate rod/staff. Gift from Huey, Duey and Lewie for making them breakfast.

Abilities : Is decent with magic, hasn't had much experience. Her best magic is defensive and healing kind. Is a good cook.

Other : Since she hasn't had much skill in fighting and only knows basic self-defense taught to her by her father, she isn't the best at fighting. The only thing she seems to be good at is healing and defensive magic. That and the fact she is good at cooking.

 

hmmmm...I'll give it a whirl.
Name:Valerie

Gender:Female

Age:12 1/2

Full History:Valerie got kidnapped by one of the Organization, but she escaped. she walked into a portal and ended up on Destiny Islands. Now she's spending life with Sora, Riku, and Kairi-Mainly Sora. In the past, her parents never told her about her having Magic powers, but during a thunderstorm, she discovers them. while living on Destiny Islands, she's trying to find a way back to her home world.

Personality:Sweet,Courageous,a Good Sense of Humor,alittle shy,Creative,smart but not a braniac,and she has a very strong Heart.

Weapon:She doesn't have one. she likes to use her discovered powers as a weapon.

Abilities:She has the Power over Lightning.Okay, she doesn't have complete control yet.

Other:She has a Humoungous Crush on Sora,and despises Kairi.

 

Name: Orion Energy

Gender: Male/Cyborg

Age: Technicly hes only a 3-year old but he was modeled, and programmed to be around the age of 21

Full History: Orion Energy came from a world known as Paragon City. The city had just barely repelled the http://www.cityofheroes.com/gameinfo/paragon_city_invasion.html Rikti Invasion. Then all the darkness and hate the Rikti harbored against the Human Race brought the Heartless to the world. Only a few heroes (9 to be exact) survived the first war and were all killed after a few weeks. There was one survivor. Orion Energy. He was able to repel the Heartless for a few years but then Organization XIII took intrest in him. The fact that he was able to fight and repel the darkness was very intresting to the Organization. At first Vexen, the scientist in the group, went alone to try and aprehend him but he failed misrably. Xemnas, wanting to try out his new recruit, sent Roxas to aprehend him. Roxas knocked him back and shot a beam of light from his Keyblade, much like when Sora locked a keyhole. Thinking it would hurt him because he had nothing to unlock but Roxas was wrong. The beam struck and a panel slid off. It revealed a heart sabalization system and a weapons power source. It all came from Orion's heart. Both Orion and Roxas were surprised. Neither thought Orion had a heart. Roxas seized his chance and knocked Orion out. After being examined for many months by Vexen (it was rumored to have been the research that made Repliku was based off of). Orion escaped and helped Sora take Org. XIII down.. though Sora didnt know it. Orion distracted the members allowing Sora to get into The Castle that Never Was. With out him Sora would have had to get past more than just Roxas and some Heartless.

Personality: Kind and Outgoing but Quiet.

Weapon: Energy Discharge and Gauntlets

Abilities: Orion is able to generate energy blasts in his heart and discharges them through his fists.

Other: Orion once had 2 other brothers, Taxibot Orion, and Silent Orion but they were killed in the Rikti war.

 

I can help judge...and I can make sigs as a prize, if ya want.....

 

My character in no way will stand up to some of the others on here (especially my friend *Oblivion*'s). I just thought I'd give it a shot. I, unfortunately, will not be giving away too many details because my character is still a working character throughout my fan-fic.


Name: Nexydys (Sydney + X) (pronounced like Exodus with an N at the front)

Female

Age: 19 (but she does reflect some immaturity) 17 as a Somebody

Appearance: Wavy dark purple hair with long black streaks, and bright, inticing violet eyes that turn a ghostly white when she uses her powers, she wears Axel's Organization cloak. (As a Somebody) Light blonde hair and blue eyes with a professor's outfit to boot.

Personality and History: (As a Nobody) Very outgoing and isn't afraid to speak her mind, has a serious attitude when it comes to getting her way. She despises being a Nobody and refuses to even use the word. She has a bit of an infatuation with Axel, which he returns to her. Her history is just in the making. (As a Somebody) Shy but she does have friends with some of the local residents (Cloud, Squall/Leon, Aerith/Aeris), she is a working apprentice for Ansem the Wise along with his six others. She also is friends with a young man named Ela, but their relationship has exceeded to far more than just friends. As far as she knows, her entire life has been lived in Radiant Garden with her friends, up until tragedy strikes.

Weapon and Abilities: Her mind is her weapon. She uses her telekenetic powers to her benefit, but sometimes her temper takes it out of control. It usually leaves her on the floor as well, nearly passed out because of the unfamiliarity she has with her newfound powers.

Other: She resents the fact that she's a Nobody and hates to even hear the word. I used much of the emotions that Roxas displayed to help Nex with her story. Roxas couldn't understand or even comprehend why he was a Nobody; the same goes for Nexydys. Although, Nex actually flaunts her temper, especially when using her powers. She usually runs off to Axel when she has a problem, but there are occasions when she tries to deal with it herself. Good ol' fashioned independency.

That's all I got for now. Good luck to everybody else!

 

Well, let's give this a shot.

Name: Terryx (Nobody) Terra (Somebody)

Gender: Female

Age: 193 in vampire years, but to normal humans, she appears to be an average 19-year old.

Full History: Shortly after her father Zoltan died, she started her trek back to her homeland to rule over her clan in her father's place, carrying nothing more than her father's necklace and his katana. Along the way, her Theron instincts told her something evil was in the area, and she knew she needed to hunt soon anyway. Her unforunate "target": Xigbar. She had barely pounced on him before she had Dusks surrounding her. Xigbar soon learned that it was just a mistake, but he wasn't about to let her go that easy and stuck her in a dungeon under the castle. Xemnas found out and let her out of her cell, but he wouldn't let her leave the castle. Instead, he made her a sort of understudy for the rest of the Organization. He changed her name to Terryx, a move that some members have labeled as "rather lazy on Xemnas's part". Now she lives and works at the castle with the Organization, but she's still waiting for the day to break free and get back to her people.

Personality: Even though she wishes to break free from her bonds with the Organization, she does not think negatively of them. If anything were to happen to any one member at any given time, she'd be the first on the scene to help them. She's on good terms with almost every member (Xigbar still hasn't quite forgiven her for pouncing on him), but she gets along best with Demyx, Axel, and Xemnas. However, there have been times where Axel was just itching to see if he can use her long black hair as a fuse.

Weapon: Her father's katana, called Setsuna, which means "calm snow" in Japanese.

Abilities: Since she is a vampire, she can cloak herself to hide from enemies. Also, all Therons turns into cats if they are unable to hunt those with evil hearts.

Other: Just a little bit about Therons: they only hunt and kill those with evil hearts, making them a sort of "vampiric crime fighter". This, however, confuses Xemnas, since how could she smell Xigbar if he doesn't have a heart? Or none of them do, for that matter? He makes it his goal to further understand this.

Also, 100 years to a Theron is like 10 years to a normal human. 10 years is like one year. Only a few Therons have ever lived past 1150. Zoltan himself was 560 before he was killed.

 

Name:Nashada(Nah-Sha-Duh)
Gender:Female
Age:16
Personality:Even though she is sarcastic and has bad timing for everything she manages to make friends easy...She has a bond with many hearts,and never
lets go of friendships.She has a strong will and is willing to fight for her point of
view.Her Best friend is Nochotada(Knock-Oh-Tad-A)a girl with a mysterious story.
She is scared to hurt her roots(bonds) and find other company but ventures with a risk on her shoulders.
History:Nashada was swallowed by the nothings when her world was destroyed.Her power granted her what many others wanted a seat in the organization but she refused.She was luckily taken by ventures of light and restored back to her full power.Her strength makes her a great warrior fighting along side Nochotada and Frithaneth(Fri-th-ne-th)her two best friends.Today she
seekd knowledge on the darkness,light and nothingness.
Power:Like Tifa she uses body strength...Her fist and legs exctract energy to stun and hurt at the same time.
Other Info:She is half Albed and has a red and green eye.She is also half vampire but,since she is only half she can't use specail vampire powers.

 

Sorry it took me so long to reply, but that would be SOOOOO GREAT! You don't know how much that would help!

 

Name: Kent

Gender: Male

Age: 19

Full History: Kent was a homeless child living in Twilight Town. He inherited a sword from his father, which he learnt to wield at the age of six, three years after his parent’s death. He was taken care of by a man, who was killed after he reached the age of six. From then on, he had to strive for himself as a child, and had to forage for food in the dark of the night. One day he was sneaking through the woods and came across a mansion, where an armoured knight stood. He was assaulted by the mysterious figure, and a scar on his leg formed to show what had happened. Kent then trudged weakly back to Twilight Town, where he was found and taken under the wing of an old lady and her husband, a warrior. He was trained in the arts of fighting by the man, and by the age of sixteen he was one of the most powerful in Twilight Town, having won the Struggle every year onwards, until the night he disappeared.

Personality: Kent is strong and antisocial, but he can be stubborn at times. He grew up with the “every man for himself†attitude, and he prefers to keep away from company.

Weapon: Romulus’ Blade (Passed down from generations)

Abilities: Kent wears a chain shaped like the Heartless symbol. When angered, Kent can sometimes see flashes of his past, and turns into a dark mutant beast, attacking whatever stands in his way without thought.

Other: Kent seeks revenge from the knight who attacked him that night, and also searches for the people who killed his parents. The first time he turned into his dark form was when he was being bullied, and it was then that he saw flashes of his past for the first time. All he remembers are screams, and a bald man with a blade resembling a key.

 

Name: Raxen, real:Raen(rain)
Age: 17
Element: space
Weapon: dual hook swords
Title: The superior
Personality: calm collected

Likes/Dislikes: those who go against his orders

Biography: he was once a boy named Quid, while really young his parents where taken by the heartless and he was left on another world where they locked him up from fear of the darkness in him, he did befriend regular people, but then he gained control of heartless and him and his friends were turned into nobodies he then cut his hair and went by Raen he set out to regain his friends hearts and stumbled across TWTNW

 

I took the quiz and I seriously hate my score. (Yes, my score was not as expected from me.) So I will try to...um...make one up as I go along.
I just hope this doesn't turn up bad.

Name: Niko
Gender: Female
Age: 17

Full History: Niko lives in Hollow Bastion/Radiant Garden. She used to be working under Ansem the Wise as a assistant. But she never really worked on any experiments with the other six. She just helped out getting equipment and reports written. She stayed with them for some time until Xehanort and the others betrayed Ansem. Thus leaving her locked in her room for a few days. On the day of Radiant Garden's fall, Niko busted herself out of her room and quickly fled out of the tower. Soon Radiant Garden fell over to the Heartless and she was soon transported to Traverse Town.
Her time in Traverse Town wasn't all the pleasant. She hated trying to defend herself from Heartlesses when she tried to walk around town (Fleeing away with a few scratches.) , thus making her stay indoors as much as possible.
When Hallow Bastion was safe to live on again (Thanks to Sora and co.) , she was happy to come back to her oringinal world. But once she saw the damage inclicted on the world, she had to help out to restore it.
A year went by, and Hollow Bastion was still in development. Niko is now a member of the restoration commitee and helps out whenever she can. She is mostly taking up her time in books and working on the defence mechanism with Cid and Leon. (So she knows when not to go outside when trouble is brewing out there.)

Personality: Quiet and loyal. Those are the two main things of her personality. Since she doesn't interact with others well and she is very obediant to anyone. (She will do every order you bark at her.) When serious, she is always keeping a serious face and keeping a stern tone of voice. But you can always see Niko with a friendly smile on most of the time. But ever mention anything to do with her past she will feel a bit saddened and distant for a bit. She is a bit jumpy (or frightened) whenever she see's Heartlesses and nobodies. (Most likely Dusk nobodies.) But she tries to fend off for herself. And she surely lacks self confidence, talk about some low-self esteem too.

Weapon: None. Unless knowledge counts. (*coughnoselfdefencecough*)

Abilities: None. If you don't count decent computer skills.

Other: She does not know anything about the Organization or nobodies as much as the others in the commitee. But one's thing for sure, she hates being randomly attacked by Shadows and Dusks whenever walking to the restoration tower.

 

Okay, the due date is tomorrow, unless if people are wanting to have it extended . . .

 

I'll give this a try with none other than the psychotic killer himself.

Name:X(Allen is his other)

Gender:Male

Age:15-17

Full History:He's a nobody who lost his memory and met up with the recently deceased Org. XIII members and joined their ranks to gain his memories despite his lack of concern for a heart. He was lost in the Deep Dive and traveled the Great Plane for an unknown amount of time. He met up with his others partners and associates he kills them one after another gaining memories and clues to his final terminus as he goes. He has killed Allen's (his other's mentor Seagle and is now about to confront the Organization that began his existence.

Personality:Apathetic, No morals, No emotions, no caring, just unknown feelings of power and presence that guide him on his path

Weapon:Heart Edge- Changes shape based on the soul's state

Abilities:Extreme fighter and abilities of the Heart Edge

Other:He wears an unzipped organization coat at this point it's torn to shreds and stained in blood. He has mid length black hair with two defiant spikes in the back. He follows instinct like a heartless and only uses his head in battle. He sees himself as a weapon that can only be used and not lain to rest. He killed all those who were important to his other even after he had memories of them because he felt he had to. He is an enigma and a killer.

He also stars in my very own
Kingdom Hearts the Dark Realm: My Story
Fanfic for a more detailed account go to The List of My Stuff on my sig

 

My fan character

Name: Luna Athans
Gender: Female
Age: 16 (Same age as Riku)
Full History: She has a pretty sad past; her parents died when she was just only 3 and her brother, Lucas was in a coma for 13 years, he haven't woke up from his slumber yet. At that time, Luna refused to talk to anyone (She suffered from shock) and throw tantrums at others, but this stopped when she met Riku one day after running away from her grandmother who is taking care of her and met Riku outside a shop, and talked for the first time after months. Riku then keeps visiting Luna and overcome her illness.

Now, she is the champion of gymastics (But left when she was 12), in a cheerleading group in Middle School (Until she reached high school to take part in the Blitzball team).

Personality: Shy and sometimes outgoing, a Jack-of-All-Trades
To Sora: Like an older sister and a role model to him, giving him advice
To Kairi: A friend and sometimes teaches her.
To Riku: First aquantance, then crush, finally girlfriend to him.
Weapon: Cards (Tarots, i think) and sometimes boots (kicking her enemies around)
Abilities: Able to run fast, enough to confuse enemies
Other: Speed and Defence is high
Attack is in the middle
Magic the lowest, her MP is not too high

Looks: Blue-blacked hair, blue eyes, tall (But shorter than Riku), skinny (Due to her Blitzball practice) and fair skinned.
What she likes to do: Singing

 

Quick question...when are the winners going to be announced? I'm just dying from the suspense! Eek!

 

I don't know, don't ask me 'cause I'm not the person in charge of this contest.

 

I'm so anxious too. >w< I can't wait!