Organization XIII's Rivals: It's back!

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  1. Near Gummi Ship Junkie

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    For all of you that have been waiting, it's finally here!

    I apologize to all the people who may have been waiting for me to restart this, I've been doing some major procrastinating 8th grade has been ruling my life and I haven't had time to brainstorm or anything.

    So, for all you who weren't here in the old thread here's how it goes:

    Basically, in an AU, there are two Organizations of Nobodies. Organization XIII, and a nameless Organization. One member from the nameless Organization found the World that Never Was, and soon enough, the Castle that Never Was. After a few days of spying on Organization XIII, that member found that they were planning to use Kingdom Hearts to get their hearts back.
    This unknown Organization wants it first.
    ________________

    "Why?"
    "I know they have something we need. I can feel it."
    "They're too powerful right now. Can't you wait?"
    "This can't wait forever."
    "It can't turn out well."
    "It probably won't turn out well."
    "Be careful."
    - - -

    "I found it."
    "Splendid."
    "However... something else occurred."
    "What is it?"
    "We've... been spotted."

    NEWS
    6/19/09 11:46 PM: Updated Rules; added Advisers and News section on first post. Gatekeeper is now an Adviser.
    6/20/09 10:18 AM: Deathsight44 is now an Adviser.
    6/20/09 11:25 PM: cstar7777's character has been removed per her request. I may not be on as much, for my cat ruined my laptop's charger... my apologies for any inconvenience this may cause down the road.
    6/21/09 6:58 PM: The Fifth Element's character, Zaliix, has been temporarily removed for inactivity. If The Fifth Element doesn't send me a visitor message or private message with a good reason for their absence, they will be excluded from the role play.
    6/25/09 1:07 PM: The Fifth Element's character, Zaliix, has been permanently removed for inactivity. ansem59 has been removed per his request. I got a new charger, so I don't have to worry about not being on KHV as much.
    6/27/09 8:39 AM: keybladewarrioroflegend's character, Phenox, has been removed for inactivity. We need someone to play Zexion.
    8/5/09 3:43 PM: I'm quitting this roleplay.... Sorry, I really just don't want to take part in it this time around. Either you guys can make a new thread, or *TwilightNight* and/or Asterisk can lead this one. See ya.

    HOME
    The nameless Organization live in a world called Shrouded City. In it, there is a city surrounded by a thick, green forest. Deep in that forest, far away from the city, is a castle. Somewhere else in the forest is a lake. Any other physical features may be added if needed in the plot.

    CHARACTERS

    Organization XIII
    I. Xemnas | Last of the Organization
    II. Xigbar | HellKitten
    III: Xaldin |
    IV: Vexen |
    V: Lexaeus | Asterisk
    VI: Zexion |
    VII: Saix | Near-to-Tears
    VIII: Axel | *TwilightNight*
    IX: Demyx | water mage
    X: Luxord |
    XI:
    Marluxia | Asterisk
    XII: Larxene | Nymph of Destiny
    XIII: Roxas | *TwilightNight*

    Nameless Organization
    I:
    II: Kexim | Deathsight44
    III: Jinnex | Near-to-Tears
    IV: Aliaxane | Magick
    V: Brixania | PainAndBliss095
    VI:
    VII:
    VIII:

    IX: Jex | morphine and lollipops
    X: Xengla | Firekeyblade
    XI: Rexyggor | Rexyggor_thenewmember
    XII:
    XIII: Xioimara | HellKitten

    ADVISERS
    My Advisers include people I trust to have the judgment to warn people when they break the rules, help newcomers fix their characters to fit the "Elite RP" environment, or discuss other issues with me or the other RP'ers as they see fit. After all, I can't be here 24/7.

    Currently, these people are:



    • Asterisk
    • Deathsight44
    OC FORM
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    Character name:
    Age:
    Number:
    Appearance:
    Ability/Element:
    Weapon:
    Bio:
    Personality:
    Text color:
    RULES



    • I don't care how unoriginal it is, your character's name MUST MUST MUST have an X in it. Also all characters usually wear Org. XIII coats <_>.
    • FOR THE LOVE OF L NO GODMODDING
    • OR POWERPLAYING
    • Use proper English. You're posts should be the same quality as something you'd submit to your English teacher.
    • Please at least try to make your posts five sentences or longer.
    • No posts shorter than three lines. Come on, you could do it if you tried. A multitude of three line posts will increase the minimum to four, and so on.
    • No Chatspeak or txt-tlk or w/e. None. NONE.
    • Put "suddenly, bananas" somewhere in your first post.
    • Romance kept to a PG-13 level. Try to follow the forum rules on cursing, but I really don't care personally.
    • Keep all rivalry inside the RP.
    • OOC is allowed to a point. If it gets to be too spammy I will ask you to take it to VM's or PM's.
    • Also put "Transformers" at the top of your first post.
    • Try to make your abilities and weapons and characters and plotlines creative, pleaaase.
    • Okay, try to come up with something creative that you can actually use.
    • Every character must have a different text color
    • If you are gone for an extended period of time(say, five days depending on the importance of your character) without explanation, you will be kicked out. I might let you back in if you PM me.
    • ABSOLUTELY NO tl;dr. If you do, I will kick you out.
    • Read other people's posts carefully.
    • Original Characters must be under 25 years of age.
    • All your posts must include your character interacting with some other character.
      [*]No Keyblades on OC's please.
      [*]If you break the rules three times, you're out. No questions.
      [*]You must not ask me to be an Adviser. If I want you as an Adviser, I will contact you.
      [*]If you or your friend doesn't get in, come up with a valid argument before you come crying to me or the mods.
      [*]Read the News and Rules sections regularly, they will change often.
      [*]"I didn't know that was a rule" is not an excuse for breaking a rule, and use of this excuse any more than once will result in exclusion from the role-play.
      [*]You may ask for a recap after you've first joined, and after missing no less than five pages.
    ORIGINAL CHARACTERS

    Username: Magick
    Character name: Aliaxane
    Age: 17
    Number: IV
    Appearance: [​IMG]
    Ability/Element: Controls glass.
    Weapon: She uses only her glass to make herself weapons. She can also use small knives hidden in her clothing.
    Bio: After she was turned into a nobody, she wandered alone and homeless. After the Organization found her, she gave her service to them without question, but always wondered who she was before she was turned.
    Personality: Sarcastic, but quiet unless spoken to, she is usually invisible to the other members. She tends to use her skills against whoever angers her, and asks questions later.
    Text color:
    Indigo
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    Username: Near-to-Tears
    Character name: Jinnex
    Age: 17
    Number: III
    Appearance: Quite a way below average height (~4'11), purple ringlet hair that's midway between her waist and her shoulders and yellow eyes that lack pupils. Tends to have her fringe pulled back with a large metallic hair clip.
    Ability/Element: Manipulation of the visible light.
    Weapon: Throwing needles
    Bio: Originally from Radiant Garden, her "Somebody" lost her heart trying to find someone in the chaos. She does not, however, remember this except in dreams, and those she usually ignores.
    Personality: Jinnex tends to be nosey and rather noisey. Pretty much everything you would not expect from a Nobody. However the only reason she acts as such is to compensate for her lack of real emotions and distract herself.
    Text color: Dark Red
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    Username: morphine and lollipops
    Character name: Jex
    Age: 17, although he has a tendency to act much younger.
    Number: Nine, please.
    Appearance: Jex is tall-ish, and lanky, at about 5'10". A thick shock of dark hair hangs over his face. Recently he added one lone silver streak through his hair. He is rather white, though not as pale as some. Think sun-kissed, but not tan. He has clear skin, though he once had horrid acne. He holds himself with an air of importance. His eyes are gray, with specks of blue.
    Ability/Element: He is gifted with the sword, and quite a poet. He has a small gift of manipulation using words. Using his gift of words, he can sometimes convince others to see things his way, or to feel differently about a situation.
    Weapon: A damn creative sword.
    Bio: Jex tends to keep to himself about his past. Honestly, he doesn’t remember much. He does, however, remember a girl of whom he feels a strong connection with. He wants his heart back to find this girl.
    Personality: Jex is like a butterfly: pretty, vain, and with his head in the clouds. He is normally a happy person, though he contains a rough sarcastic streak. When faced with a serious problem, Jex can and will be serious. He is quite loyal, but also a prankster. At times, he can be slightly angsty.
    Text color:
    Pale Turquoise
    ______________________

    Username: PainAndBliss095
    Character name: Brixania
    Age: 16
    Number: V
    Appearance:http://i141.photobucket.com/albums/r47/azincsenkahai/Makaila05-1.jpg
    Ability/Element: Water
    Weapon: Two Fans
    Bio: Brixania doesn't really care if she gets her heart or not, so she kind of ignores anything that might or is related to her past. She can't remember anything of her 'Somebody', not that she cares, and is only looking for something to amuse her, even though she doesn't feel any emotions.
    Personality: Perky, bubbly, unusually malicious
    Text color: Purple
    ______________________

    Username: Deathsight44
    Character name: Kexim
    Age: 18
    Number: 2
    Appearance: http://i595.photobucket.com/albums/t...-_-/aax36b.jpg
    Ability/Element: energy (can create particles of energy and form it as he wishes, as well as being able to harden it into a diamond like substance)
    Weapon: The two things that are seen in the picture, which serve as shields, though they can be used to generate his crystals as well
    Bio: The first one to join into Xelidans orginization, not knowing him from his past, but merely encountering him. he has kept to himself for most of the time until the discovery of an enemy orginization. He does not reveal his appearance to others, only very rarely, since it has only been revealed to Xelidan. He also tends to do most of the spying for Xelidan, keeping an eye on his members, since most of the time he goes along unnoticed. Not speaking nor being seen by others. His goals out of this orginization remain unknown to him, and him alone.
    Personality: Very anti-social at the moment, though he'll slowly begin to speak more and more as time goes on, revealing his true nature
    Text color: Black

    _________________

    Username:HellKitten
    Character name:Xioimara
    Age:Fourteen
    Number:I think I got reserved under XIII? >.<
    Appearance: Xioimara has medium length auburn red hair and light brown eyes. She isn't the tallest of everyone and stands at about 5' 4''.
    Ability/Element: Xioimara can shift forms to a dog.
    Weapon: Xioimara uses whatever is in her surroundings. Mostly she just fights in her dog form which also gives her great agility.
    Bio: She has no recollection her past. There's bits and pieces but she purposely did her best to forget them. Xioimara joined the Organization as she saw it as a better chance in life.
    Personality: Xioimara is quiet most of the time. Sometimes she is talkative depending on who is speaking with her. She is known to be brave but does have her cowardly moment.
    Text color:Teal
     
  2. Axel.

    And Roxas.
     
  3. Near Gummi Ship Junkie

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    Someone didn't read the rulleeessssss :l

    Oh well, you're in anyway :lolface: 'cause you're awesome like that.

    Let's see how long I remember to update the first post this time lol.​
     
  4. I forgot.

    TRANSFORMERS, more than meets the eye.

    =P

    But YAY!
     
  5. Asterisk NO WONT LET YOU

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    Transformers, suddenly bananas, etc, etc...

    Lexaeus and Marluxia, like the good old days.
     
  6. Near Gummi Ship Junkie

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    Thank you for reading the rules, and you're in! ::L:​
     
  7. Magick ~Meaner then my demons~

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    bleh, transformers....and suddenly bananas, those stupid fruits.
    Username: Magick
    Character name: Aliaxane
    Age: 17
    Number: IV
    Appearance: [​IMG]
    Ability/Element: Controls glass.
    Weapon: She uses only her glass to make herself weapons. She can also use small knives hidden in her clothing.
    Bio: After she was turned into a nobody, she wandered alone and homeless. After the Organization found her, she gave her service to them without question, but always wondered who she was before she was turned.
    Personality: Sarcastic, but quiet unless spoken to, she is usually invisible to the other members. She tends to use her skills against whoever angers her, and asks questions later.
    Text color: Black. Please? If not. Indigo B(
     
  8. water mage Kingdom Keeper

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    (OOC: I was debating whether of joining this or not so why not?
    Tranformers and suddendly bananas. Demyx of course and I may have an OC character come in, but for now Demyx. I'll let you know if I do.)
    I would like to have blue please.
     
  9. Emzy ♥ Gummi Ship Junkie

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    hmmm....
    This sounds really interesting.
    I think I might take a shot at Larxene.

    I pounced on a transformer,
    then,
    it went and screamed "I am gonna go suddenly, bananas!"

    8D
     
  10. Near-to-Tears Hollow Bastion Committee

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    Can I be my OC and Saix please?
    Or I may go suddenly bananas and set Transformers on you. <_< >_>

    Username: Near-to-Tears
    Character name: Jinnex
    Age: 17
    Number: III
    Appearance: Quite a way below average height (~4'11), purple ringlet hair that's midway between her waist and her shoulders and yellow eyes that lack pupils. Tends to have her fringe pulled back with a large metallic hair clip.
    Ability/Element: Manipulation of the visible light.
    Weapon: Throwing needles
    Bio:Originally from Radiant Garden, her "Somebody" lost her heart trying to find someone in the chaos. She does not, however, remember this except in dreams, and those she usually ignores.
    Personality: Jinnex tends to be nosey and rather noisey. Pretty much everything you would not expect from a Nobody. However the only reason she acts as such is to compensate for her lack of real emotions and distract herself.
    Text color: Dark Red please?
     
  11. Ansem59 Chaser

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    I am new to this thread... but I will join... I will take Zexion... thank you.

    "suddenly bannas and transformers

    Username: Ansem59
    Character name: Raxtion
    Age: 23
    Number: X
    Appearance: Tall, Blond hair... wears a white vest and blue pants.
    Ability/Element: Absorbs other people's powers for a short period
    Weapon: Spirit Sword
    Bio: Raxtion was a man who use to love torturing people with taunts and harsh words... and let the darkness within him swell through his lips... until it consumed his whole heart and being. His forgetfulness of his emotion's has served as punishment for his evil ways.
    Personality: He always has a negative word or harsh joke to say or tell. However he can be very serious when he wants to... and love's nothing more than to hurt people physically, even more than emotionally. The lose of his heart has taken away the joy of hurting someone... and tries all that he can to get that feeling back... by doing whatever he can.
    Text color: Dark Orange
     
  12. The Fifth Element Traverse Town Homebody

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    Username: The Fifth Element

    Character name: Zaliix

    Age: 18

    Number: 13

    Appearance: Zaliix has short spikey silver hair with black streaks in it. She wears black bondage pants with a white tank top with a black skull on it. She wears combat boots with metal tips. Always can be seen with a studded belt, bracelets and maybe a dog collar on.

    Ability/Element: metal

    Weapon: a sickle and chain

    Bio: Can remember only a few things from her real life such as a larger fire and someone screaming something at her.

    Personality: Quiet but has a large temper, always goes for the kill

    Text color: This color "Silver"


    suddenly bananas and transformers
     
  13. cstar stay away from my waifu

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    "Suddenly,Bananas and Transformers.

    Username: Cstar7777
    Character name: Shixoh
    Age: 15
    Number: VII
    Appearance: http://images.quizilla.com/K/KI/KIL/killing.is.my.life/1197763277_AnimeGoth.jpg
    Ability/Element: Wind
    Weapon: Armblades http://www.deviantart.com/download/45785059/SC_Talim__s_Weapon_by_HinataGoddess.png
    Bio: Her someone, Hoshi. Never had any friends so when she was swallowed and turned into a heartless. no one cared. she eventually disappeared leaving Shixoh to roam free. she eventually joined the nameless orgainization
    Personality: Shy, Quite, Wild Card, Friendly
    Text color: deep sky blue..(plays dramatic music on piano)
     
  14. Near Gummi Ship Junkie

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    Nevermind the PM, she's in as long as she actually has a weapon to summon, like throwing knives or something.

    You're in.

    You're in, but you have to have an actual weapon to summon.

    Sorry, but you're going to have to pick either Metal or Time. Not both. And you have to pick one weapon. Fix those, and you're in.

    You're in, just try to use better grammar/punctuation in your posts.

    You can take Zexion, but be careful and make sure he's in character. As for the OC, sorry, not in.
     
  15. cstar stay away from my waifu

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    ooc: sorry.. i was rushing the entry since i had to do something else at that moment
     
  16. Dexnail Twilight Town Denizen

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    Transformers suddenly bannanas :3

    Username: Dexnail
    Character name: Xeol
    Age: 17
    Number: 4
    Appearance: He wears an organization uniform,has brown hair that is short in the back the sides stops at his caller bone and his front stops at his eye brows, has green eyes
    Ability/Element: :create and controll fog able to make fog clones,he is able to turn into fog and able to turn fog into daggers
    Weapon: Foged memories( a very sharp silver dagger)
    Bio: His somebody Leo was a very good friend loved hangin out with people and all that. On his 17th birthday the heartless attacked his hometown he did all he could to save his friends. Sadly the heartless was too much and they wanted a strong heart so Leo sacrificed himself to save his two friends Tydus and Amber. Xeol walked around the world not knowing what to do untell he found Xeledin. Ever since he served the organization trying his best to make himself usefull to them.
    Personality: relaxed,playfull,hats to be under estimated, hates boredum

    Text color: Seagreen

    Username: Dexnail
    Character name: Raxazu
    Age: 21
    Number: 6
    Appearance: wears an organization cloak, sandy blond hair that is short in the back and sides the front covers his right eye it stops at his caller bone, his right eye is blind and his left eye is brown
    Ability/Element: Sand, he is able to creat and form sand. He can freely controll it but becomes useless if it touches water.he can can make it harden providing an shield. He can also use the sand to attack his opponets.
    Weapon: an Arabien Scimatar(its a sword that is big and curved Alladin uses it in kingdom hearts 2 and it came from the middle east and its considerd an Arabien sword i hope that helps on the weapon discripton cause its being a real pain to find) that is made out of hardend sand and sand falls off of it occasionally
    Bio: He was a prince named Azura he never cared for anyone. Azura thought people that was lower then him was useless with that there was darkness always in his heart. Well when the heartless attacked the only two people the saltain could secrafice was his daughter Jasmin or his son Azura. Everyone loved Jasmin but everybody hated Azura becouse how he treated everyone. Azura was used as an secrafice to make the heartless happy and turned into an nobody. Raxazu roamed around then he found the organization and joined it.
    Personality: only cares for himself, only helps people if it benefits his goals, he thinks weak people should just die, he thinks he is better then everyone

    Text color: Sienna
     
  17. Near Gummi Ship Junkie

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    Please don't post the same thing twice. I saw it the first time and I've sent you the reasons that your characters weren't accepted.
     
  18. Near-to-Tears Hollow Bastion Committee

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    Okay, sorry. I was just trying to come up with something totally different to my normal stuff, I'll just put it as that instead.
    And I also missed out the bio, I totally forgot it sorry ._.'
     
  19. Near Gummi Ship Junkie

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    Oh wow I didn't even notice o_O It's fine xD.
     
  20. Near-to-Tears Hollow Bastion Committee

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    Least I wasn't the only one to have a daft moment then XD
    Thankies~
     
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