Organization XIII - The beach Part 1

Discussion in 'Archives' started by ThunderOfLarxene, Apr 14, 2007.

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What did you think

  1. It was really good well done

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  2. It was ok, not bad for a first

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  3. Could of been better

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  1. ThunderOfLarxene Gummi Ship Junkie

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    Ok, this is my first story, but i hope you like it, and enjoy it
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    "Wake up Wake up"

    None of the organization members had heard such screaming so early in the morning. Not long after the outburst Axel, Larxene, Zexion, Roxas, Xigbar and Marluxia half heartedly waltzed into the kitchen, to find Demyx running around like a headless chicken. This beserk mode soon wore off when demyx was halted by the freeshooter pointing a sniper inches from Demyx's faces

    "You better have a good reason for this" grumbled xigbar

    "Of course i do, IT THE DAY FOR BEACH" screamed happily Demyx

    All the others looked at each other in the oh yeah i kind of forgot about that way, and each went back to their rooms to back their bags for the summer day out. Meanwhile demyx was on hyper mode gettin everything perfect. He enjoyed these days, espcially the chance to have fun in the sea.

    Half an hour passed and all members were finaly ready to leave. Demyx created a dark portal and all members passed through, for there day out

    "Remember no powers in the other world, we dont want to draw attention to ourselves"

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    AT THE BEACH

    Demyx was already in the ocean alongside zexion who finally put down his book, but wished he stayed because demyx was hardly peaceful, creating bigger tidal waves than the sea could. Xigbar and Roxas played volleyball while Axel, Larxene and Marluxia, sunbathed beside them.

    "Hey roxas" wispered Xigbar

    "Yeah"

    "Do you remember what happened to axels hair when it gets wet" A cheesy grin appeared on Xigbars faces the more he thought about it

    "Ah i get you"

    Both silently giggled to each other as Roxas filled up a little bucket for making sandcastles with water. All three had their eyes closed so failed to notice II and XIII creep up.

    *SPLOOOOOOSH*

    'OMG what the %$$^%$%^$^&, my hair, my hair, RRRROOOOXXXXAAAASSSSS'

    Roxas and Xigbar ran for there lives as Axel chased them along the beach, with not so spikey hair. Demyx had finaly calmed down allowing Zexion to float in the ocean in peace.

    "Urgh... im bored, im going to get an ice cream, do you want one Marluxia" said larxene

    "Er.. yeah go on then, thanyou, ill have a plain 99 with a flake"

    Larxene got up and strolled off to find the nearest Ice cream van, catching the attention of many young males, meanwhile axel had returned looking more than happy, being unable to catch the devious pair. Axel layed back down without a word, hoping the sun would dry his hair out and return it to some normality.

    AT THE ICE CREAM VAN

    "Yeah thats two 99's with flakes please"

    Larxene now with her's and Marluxia's Ice Cream's began to wander back to the beach, which was now at some distance since she got frustrated with the closer one and blew up the machine. She never minded boy's attention, didnt bother her, but today she felt uneasy, and it takes alot for the savage nymph to feel uneasy. She started to walk abit faster, hoping to get to the beach quicker, where she would feel safer. "One more corner to go" she thought to herself, "then i'll be back at the beach"

    As she walked along the street a group of hooded figures approached her, they were all young teenagers. She tried to carry on past, but was halted by the group, making escape difficult

    "Your coming with us" insisted one of the hoodies

    "Excuse me, you dont know who you messing with, now get out of my way"

    "GET HER" screamed the same hoody

    All the hoodies dragged her into the alley, out of site, leaving the two ice creams on the floor in a big mess. Her screams for the others were muffeled by the hand of one of the hoodies. The hoodies planned to use Larxene as a ransom for money. She was taken, well dragged, she didnt give in without a fight, to a low basement under one of the building, just outside the beach. She was left there tied up, while the others walked off to plan their scam

    "Where are you guys, i need your help" Larxene was now feeling scared, another emotion hardly seen by her. But there was nothing she could do for the time being, all she could do was wait.... and wait.

    BACK AT THE BEACH

    An hour and half had passed, and marluxia had started to actually wonder where is Ice Cream was, and where Larxene had gone to.

    "Whats a matter Marluxia" said xigbar, as they both bravely returned from running from axel. Axel gave a glare at roxas but then smiled, in a forgivng way.

    "Larxene left to get us two ice creams about an hour and a half ago but she hasnt returned"

    "Shes probably gone shopping" calmly replied axel

    "Maybe, but something doesnt feel right, im going to see if i can go and find her, i need to go for a walk anyways, because when Axel dozes off, HE SNORES"

    Axels faced blushed as xigbar and roxas giggled, Marluxia got up, put on his t-shirt and walked off in the direction larxene had. Marluxia was lookin for 15 minutes when he came accross two splattered ice creams on the floor. "Someone been a bit careless" He giggled to himself. But then he noticed something shiny next to them. He picked it up to see it was larxenes bracelet, snapped, it was her favourite bracelet, it had eight kunai charms on it. It was a present from axel

    "Something's not right here"

    Marluxia hurried back to the beach with the bracelet, to find that demyx and zexion where sunbathing alongside the others.

    "Axel, Axel" Marluxia screamed, as he sprinted towards the group

    Axel turned around and knew something was wrong


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    End of Chapter 1

    Will the other nobodies be able to find larxene in time, and why do these hoodies want to use her for ransom????
     
  2. Zexion of the Twilight The conflicts within my priorities....

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    This belongs in the Creativity Corner, that's a Fan Fiction.
     
  3. ThunderOfLarxene Gummi Ship Junkie

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    ok sorry about that, i didnt know

    Ill make sure its the the creativity corner for chapter 2, sorry about the mess up
     
  4. Zexion of the Twilight The conflicts within my priorities....

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    It's ok, I saw another person make the same mistake. Some people just don't read other threads for examples. I'll PM a staff member and, hopefully, it'll be moved by tomorrow.
     
  5. ThunderOfLarxene Gummi Ship Junkie

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    ok thankyou :)
     
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