Organization XIII Rockstars (introduction)

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Are you excited for Organization XIII Rockstarts?

  1. YEAH!

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  2. uhhh

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  3. no

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  4. PLEASE DON'T WRITE IT

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  5. I cant wait!

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  6. I.DONT.CARE.

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  1. dancecat120 Gummi Ship Junkie

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    Okay, you might have read the Kairi's Choice story which ended a week ago.

    I have decided to create a new story *waits for yays or nos*

    so I am starting this one differently. I made a video for it (like a preview sort of) so check it out and if you like it (please vote on the poll and comment) then the first chapter will be up later tonight :)

    [​IMG]Click here to see Video


    please excuse the typo in the poll....

    unfortunatly you can't change it once it is up :(
     
  2. 2Foxxie4U ~The Forgotten Crusader...~

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    DAMN IT!!! DX

    I need to write faster before everybody steals my ideas or whatever! XDDDD;

    Seems good, though! ^-^;

    *is determined to finish at least 1 story this weekend* >.>;
     
  3. dancecat120 Gummi Ship Junkie

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    wait? I didn't know you were writing a story about this?

    If you want it you can have it:D So just um private mail me if you are or are not writing a story about this, I'll wait to hear from you before bringing out chapter 1

    I can think of plently more ideas easily

    thanks:D :)
     
  4. 2Foxxie4U ~The Forgotten Crusader...~

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    Nah, you called it first. XD; Besdes, with all this crap on my hands right now, it'd take, like, a month to get to it anyways. ^-^

    DO ET!!!!!! XDDDDDDDDD
     
  5. dancecat120 Gummi Ship Junkie

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    Cool!

    I just do this because it's a nice form of procrastination :)

    I think the first chapter will come out in a few hours even though I finished writing it already:)
     
  6. 2Foxxie4U ~The Forgotten Crusader...~

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    We have so much in common... XD;

    And it's good to keep your audience wanting more! >=D *does it a lot when she has 2 or more stories out already*

    I'll be lookin' forward to it! =3
     
  7. dancecat120 Gummi Ship Junkie

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    thanks, I'm hoping some of the my old readers arn't disappointed this is not a love story

    Okay I don't know what kind of story it is yet but it's not a love story:D
     
  8. dancecat120 Gummi Ship Junkie

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    Organization XIII Rockstars Chapter One

    Okay so now I am starting the new story. It is about organization XIII, but a lot of Demyx in there (it's from a third person view, like Demyx sees it happening to himself or something but it's like his thought, what ever please read :) and if you missed the trailer here it is again :) :


    http://video.kh-vids.net/video/1d7da29d-a96a-4e3f-a3b3-99160104a81f.htm


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    Chapter One:



    The Castle that Never Was: Demyx’s Room


    Demyx was playing shoots and ladders with Roxas. Other organization members were scattered around the house. They were in Demyx’s bed room. Axel was also in the room just watching them. It was raining out side and a quite boring day in the castle. Currently, Demyx was winning. Roxas was two shoots away from losing. He had a very angry look on his face.

    Roxas rolled the die, he got shoots. “Shoots! I hate this game.” Roxas got up and sat in the corner. He was definitely mad. As he got up he pushed the board off of the table they were playing at.

    Axel laughed. “Woah, Roxas chill, it is just a game.” He went over to where Demyx was.

    Demyx looked quite bored. “Okay since I picked the last game, and Roxas lost. I think that he should get to pick the next game.” He smiled and looked up at Roxas.

    Roxas went over to a stack of games piled up in the corner of Demyx’s room. He blandly picked up a deck of cards. “How about go fish?” The three of them gathered around the table and Axel started to deal out cards. While he was doing that they all heard a knock on the door. Because none of them had been expecting anyone they just ignored it. Suddenly they heard Xemnas’s voice over the speaker:

    “Will all organization members please report to the conference room? NOW!”

    They all shrugged and hurried out of the room.

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    The Castle that Never Was: Conference room


    Each one of them took their normal seats in the chairs. Xemnas came in with some dude in a suit. Xemnas took his seat and every one looked at him wondering who the guy below was. Xemnas made some sort of gesture to him to tell him to talk.

    “Excuse me Organization XIII.” Everyone around the room gasped. “Oh, no need to be startled. I was in twilight town and I heard a lot of people talking about you.”

    All of the members still looked confused. Saix spoke. “No duh people were talking about us! Why do you want to talk to us?”

    “Well Organization XIII, what are you?” The guy said.

    There was a lot of whispering around the room. Xemnas talked. “Organization XIII is just a group of friends.” He lied.

    “I think you are lying. What friends live together and where the same clothes? In my opinion, Organization XIII sounds like a band.”

    Every one was silent. They didn’t know what to say. Demyx started talking. “You guys, it’s okay he found out. He might make us famous. Yes we are a band. We will need to talk it over but why don’t you come back tomorrow around the same time.” Demyx smiled. The guy waved and walked out of the room.

    Xemnas looked up. “Demyx, do you have a band?”

    “Um, not yet.”

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    Okay so that was chapter one. Hope you liked it! Please comment and vote on the poll!
     
  9. dancecat120 Gummi Ship Junkie

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    Thanks

    Next chapter might come out um uh....I don't know yet

    I am going to work on it in a bit.

    I need a organization member to be like really bad at some thing....any ideas?
     
  10. Quiet Elegy This is the death of beauty.

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    how about larxene trys guitar and cant get it right...then she smashes it cuz she has a short temper :D
     
  11. dancecat120 Gummi Ship Junkie

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    lol, sounds pretty cool

    I think making fun of her could work :)
     
  12. dancecat120 Gummi Ship Junkie

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    thanks :)

    I'm going to start writing chapter two in the morning :)
     
  13. dancecat120 Gummi Ship Junkie

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    Thanks

    and for those who do not live where I am (idk who)

    by coming out in the morning that is in about 11 hours :)
     
  14. twilit_shadow King's Apprentice

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    This sounds like the beginning to a very funny fic. Looking forward to the next bit! (I wanna see Axel and his fiery drums!!!!!)
     
  15. dancecat120 Gummi Ship Junkie

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    thanks

    we wont 'see' them play for a while

    xemnas still needs to deel with demyx

    and they need try outs (which will be funny) I plan to make some try out videos
     
  16. dancecat120 Gummi Ship Junkie

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    Organization XIII Rockstars chapter two

    Sorry it took so long. This is a long chapter and it has a something special for the readers. Who will audition? What will Xemnas do to Demyx? Only reading the next chapter will tell.


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    Chapter Two



    The Castle That Never Was: Conference Room



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    Recap

    “I think you are lying. What friends live together and where the same clothes? In my opinion, Organization XIII sounds like a band.”

    Every one was silent. They didn’t know what to say. Demyx started talking. “You guys, it’s okay he found out. He might make us famous. Yes we are a band. We will need to talk it over but why don’t you come back tomorrow around the same time.” Demyx smiled. The guy waved and walked out of the room.

    Xemnas looked up. “Demyx, do you have a band?”

    “Um, not yet.”


    End of Recap

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    “Every one can leave now.” Xemnas said, forcing a smile. All of the organization members started to exit the room. Xemnas looked at Demyx getting up. “Demyx, stop right where you are.” He said harshly.

    “Xemnas, I can explain.”

    “Really? We aren’t a band and you told some big guy in a suit that we are! I’d like a good explanation!” Xemnas boomed.

    “Well I can play my sitar. I am sure that other people are good at something in this house. I am going to have auditions. Every member must be in the band.”

    “Okay, get to work.” Xemnas said and they both left the room.

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    Sign up Sheet for Organization XIII

    Sing (3pm today)

    Dance (4pm today)

    Drums (5pm today)

    Back Stage Work (6pm today)

    Manager (7pm today)

    Piano (8pm today)


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    After posting the sign-up sheet and making an announcement he went up to his room to be alone, and practice his sitar.

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    Demyx’s Room

    He took the list off of the board at 2:45 so that he could figure out who was going to do what.

    Sign up Sheet for Organization XIII

    Sing (3pm today) Roxas
    Saix
    Xemnas
    Marluxia

    Dance (4pm today) Roxas
    Zexion
    Xigbar
    Vexen
    Larxene

    Drums (5pm today) Roxas
    Axel
    Xaldin
    Lexaeous

    Back Stage Work (6pm today) Roxas
    Xigbar
    Zexion
    Marluxia
    Larxene
    Luxord

    Manager (7pm today) Roxas
    Xemnas

    Piano (8pm today) Roxas
    Vexen
    Saix


    He looked over the list. Wow, this is going to be interesting.


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    Auditioning Room

    Roxas, Saix, Xemnas, and Marluxia walked into the room. Demyx gave them some music to attempt to sing. He also recorded it on a tape. All of them were surprisingly good. After they all sang, he told them to leave and watched the tape:

    This is the Audition Video

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    Later in the Day

    Roxas, Zexion, Xigbar, Vexen, and Larxene walked into the room for the dancing try outs. First Roxas attempted to dance. He had absolutely no idea what he was doing. Because Demyx was afraid he would hurt himself, he told him to leave. Xigbar and Larxene both got mad half way through their dances and broke out in fight. Surprisingly enough, Zexion can sort of dance. He was the best of the bunch.

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    Later Still

    Roxas, Axel, Xaldin, and Lexaeous all walked into the room to try out for drumming. Xaldin and Lexaeous we okay but they had never really played the drums before. When Roxas came up, he had absolutely no rhythm what so ever and it sounded very, very bad. Axel was good. He didn’t do much but he was good. He did a million times better than the other members.

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    Much Much later

    For piano the only people who tried out were Saix, Vexen, and Roxas. Roxas really wasn’t good at piano. He just signed up for everything. Vexen and Saix were both good.

    After everyone had auditioned, Demyx took a break. He put up the list and went to sleep.

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    Hope you all liked it! Please comment.

    Sorry about the poll, I didn't find out about it till after I posted it up. No chapters of mine will have polls anymore
     
  17. Soushirei 運命の欠片

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    You're not allowed to please polls in Creativity Corner threads anymore. This was in effect since yesterday. Please read the stickies.
     
  18. dancecat120 Gummi Ship Junkie

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    Thanks, I thought the video was funny because all of the auditioners were male :)