Inside Castle That Never Was, Marluxia's Bedroom~ Marluxia opened up his bedroom window, carrying a bowl full of water to water his plants. They were small roses, and their sweet fragrance wafted into the window. Just as he was cutting the dead flowers off the stems, there was a BANG above his head, and a fireball blasted past his window. Marluxia leaned out the window. "AXEL?" He called. "Yup?" Axel's bright shock of red hair was not well hidden behind his shrubs. "What're you doing?" "Um...trying to kill Larxene. She called me a Potato-Chip stealer, just because she caught me eating thirty chips in the living room and trying to read Xemnas's journal." "Er...whatever." Marluxia watched Larxene stick her tongue out at Axel, and he scream "BURN" loudly. "Juveniles." he muttered, putting fresh soil into his flowers pots and smoothing it down. Ah, how he loved his flowers. "Marluxia! Watch out!" Marluxia barely had time to react when a book hit him. His forehead hit the glass window, and stars blinked in front of his eyes. Staggering, he reached for something to stabalize himself as he wobbled around. Oh, goodness, I think I might...He bumped into his desk. Coming back to his senses, he watched as the packet of wet, moist soil flew out of his reach and onto his bed, making a long, dark brown mark. "Ugh," he grumbled, looking at the mess on his pink bedspread. "Sorry about that, Marluxia. Xaldin decided he wanted to carry books back into the library by wind, but that doesn't work, does it?" It was Roxas. "No, it doesn't." Marluxia growled, rubbing his aching forehead. Now, I gotta clean this mess up, he thought angrily. He grabbed a bucket of water, some soap, and a mop. Pouring the soap onto the floor, he dunked the mop into the water and began washing his floor again until it was spotless. Just then, Xigbar's shout erupted down the hall. His laser bullet struck the dirty bucket of water, making it fly all over. Now, there was a brown puddle of water on his used-to-be-spotless floor. "Gurrrr.....XIGBAR!!!" He went into the bathroom, finding Larxene sitting on thea chair, reading a book. "Hey," she waved. "Where's Axel?" Marluxia asked as he grabbed a towel. "With Xemnas, for 'stealing his journal'." "How come you're reading a book in the bathroom?" "I dunno, I just wanted to. I'm going to take a bath in twenty minutes and Zexion was about ready to dunk in. You know how he is - 'I like stinging hot showers!'" "O.K..." Marluxia left with his towels, only to be knocked over (again), by Saix. "Sorry, are you okay?" he asked, looking at Marluxia. "If you don't count all the bruises on my body, yeah I'm okay." he growled. "Sorry." Saix replied, walking around Marluxia. Marluxia sighed and keep going, now angrier than ever. As he was walking, he heard Demyx playing his music again, this time that annoying Three Six Mafia soundtrack. After wiping the floor and washing it again, Marluxia had heard enough of that booming music and stormed out into the hallway. He turned Demyx's doorknob. He found Demyx asleep on his bed, with his iPod speakers turned up to MAX. Pulling the cord out the wall, he watched Demyx wake up. "Huh...hey, I was just having a good dream about them..." he yawned. "Yeah, well I'm tired of HEARING them, if you don't mind. Why don't you take your 'mafia' back where they belong - in the mafia." Marluxia left Demyx and was walking down the hallway back to him room to wash his sheets when he saw Xemnas walking down the hallway also carrying a stack of books. "Marluxia, can you help me file these?" he asked. Marluxia took a deep breath. "O-Kay." he grumbled, taking some. Xemnas started chattering about Kingdom Hearts. Marluxia was not listening. It went out one ear and came out the other. The only words he picked up were 'hearts', 'organization', 'roxas', 'heartless', 'me', and some other things that he forgot. After he helped arrange the books, he left to finally wash his sheets. Putting them in his laundry basket, he walked down to the washroom. In the washroom, he found Vexens washing AND drying some clothes. "It's Axel's, Roxas's, mine, yours, Larxene's, and Xaldin's." he said. "How long is it going to take?" Marluxia asked impatiently, tapping his food. "The washer and dryer's finished, so it's all yours," Vexen left to fold the the laundry. Putting his sheet carefully in the washer, he picked up his detergent bottle. It was empty. "Oh, great, who used up all my favorite detergent?" He then went downstairs into the basement, where Roxas asked him to help him find his door key. He did. Once he found his detergent, he put it in the washing machine and didn't even waste his time going back to retrieve it. I might as well take a nap. Marluxia put on his longuing clothes, but he was interupted by Larxene's high voice: "MARLUXIA!"
Cool! Keep going! But I found that you should work on making the story more interesting. It's good, but you keep expecting bad things happening to Marluxia.
Thank you for complimenting my works (tehe). I will work on writing a more interesting story. ^^ SilentNocturne
