Organization 13(LOL!)Chapter 1

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  1. YES IT IS GREAT I READ IT 2 TIMES SO FUNNY OMG!

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  2. NO TRASH THAT PIECE OF _____(YOU FILL THAT IN)

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  1. Daenerys Targaryen ok

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    Organization 13(LOL!)

    Chapter 1:

    ~Fashion from fire~

    Axel woke up in a good mood.He was thinking about a costume change so he got on some clothes that would change the scenery.He walked out of his room and -
    (I'll tell you later)

    ~meanwhile~

    Luxord got up and went to his closet.All of his clothes were black coats,pants and shoes.He sighed."Getting bored.."he muttered.

    ~back to Axel~


    Axel walked to the breakfast room.Marluxia took one look at him and started laughing."Man what are you wearing?"he asked."Something different.."said Axel
    Marluxia smiled"I think we can all see that."Xaldin joined in on the laughing.Xemnas came down the stairs.He took a deep breath."Axel why are you wearing red pumps and a halter dress?"he asked.He slowly opened his eyes again and did a double-take."Lord help us.."he said after awhile."I am trying to change up these boring costumes!"Axel yelled."But,why not dress like a man next time?"Xemnas left in shock.

    ~meanwhile~


    Demyx woke up he saw his Sitar.He summoned it.He started playing a song and got a feeling.A beautiful one.


    ~back to the Axel(wo)man~

    Demyx ran downstairs past Axel.He walked back up slowly to see if he was seeing things,then rubbed his eyes.He ran away.Luxord walked past him to in shock.Then walked back upstairs into Larxene's room.He grabbed a lipstick(red)and handed it to Axel."Here man it completes the look."said Luxord laughing.
    Axel took it and spread it all over his lips."Awesome."he replied.

    ~to Larxene~

    "Where's my red lipstick!!!???!?"

    ~Axel~

    Yay!I am finally looking like the jack -----i really am...


    OK THEN AXEL IS LOOSING IT!BACK T DA STORY


    Demyx walked down to Saix it started a chain-reaction.Everyone started laughing at Axel.Even Larxene who was the first to say."So thats where me lipstick went I am gonna kill ya Axel!"

    ~Axel in bed~
    (HE IS LIKE DEAD LIKE OMG!)

    AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH the pain he thought.

    Then he woke up out of his dream he rubbed his lips and looked in his closet for any red dress.God!What the ----- was that about?






    HOPE YOU ENJOYED PPL AND REMEMBER:IF YOU ARE EVER NEAR AXEL LIKE THAT PLZ GIVE HIM DEMYX'S LIPSTICK INSTEAD!LARXENE KILLED FOR WRITING THIS!


    Sorry for any grammar,cap,spelling and puntuation mistakes!

    BE SURE TO THANK THE EASTER BUNNY AND -


    NEVER EAT FRIED WORMS

    TY!@_@
     
  2. 2Foxxie4U ~The Forgotten Crusader...~

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    Uh.... I think it was a good idea, but coulda been written a wee bit better... ^-^;

    So, yeah... I'm indifferent. ._.;

    WORK ON IT!

    ~Leah
     
  3. Daenerys Targaryen ok

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    I'll take that as a complement
     
  4. Zexion of the Twilight The conflicts within my priorities....

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    Could use some work, and major revision.................
     
  5. Axel's#1fangirl Kingdom Keeper

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    That was...diferent...
     
  6. Desmonic Kingdom Keeper

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    Yeah, write another chapter and I will tell you if its diferent for worse or better..
     
  7. Luxiaj Moogle Assistant

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    >< You stretched the page with all those question marks... Now the page is @#$%ed up...
     
  8. xxFirexandxTwilightxx Merlin's Housekeeper

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    I agree... Don't stretch... ><
     
  9. Leximia_XIV Moogle Assistant

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    Why... Stupid poll with too many Question Marks...
     
  10. Reoy Hollow Bastion Committee

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    me too i agree dont do that again please i got kinda confuse by someparts of your story sorry
     
  11. Daenerys Targaryen ok

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    ok i was trying something different i will think of something else and not stretch oh well!