Traditional Art Opinion?

Alright, here are some original works of art, made by yours truly. Please comment or tell me what I could have done differently (aside from using a scanner because I don't have one).

Sorry if any of them are somewhat blurry, I had to use a camera. Also, I would have just put the pictures on here, but they're rather large....(had issues shrinking them).


http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/60445624/

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/59817613/ (just a sketch)

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/59448089/ (I really like this one but please ignore the stupid writings)

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/59449956/ (just a new design)

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/59455798/ (a favorite, but ignore background and blurriness!)

Thanks ^^

 

You guys, using a camera doesn't mean it has to be blurry! On the contrary, there's a special function that helps capture a picture quickly enough before you can jitter by the slightest inch and make your image fuzzy. I'm not sure of it's name in english, but I think it's Speed Shutter...or shutter speed? I have no idea. Read your manual lol. XD (okay so maybe it depends on the cam, but I'd surprise me if any digi cam as of late didn't have that function, or set it up automatically. then again who I am to talk *no expert in cameras*)

Anyway, your drawings. For the most part, they're pretty decent, but I'd have to say you need to work more on giving your subjects volume AKA work more on shading. The last 3 ones lack both structure and volume, making them look relatively flat.

Though not bad, dear~

 

Alright, thanks for the tips ^^. Now that I look at them, I think you're right. The main reason I didn't shade many was because I was thinking of coloring some.