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  1. Boy Wonder Dark Phoenix in Training

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    Basically, the X-Men have gotten an increasing number of mutant students (Original Characters). Professor X decided to split them up into groups for training. Each group is mentored by a different (existing) X-Man. Cyclops (me) will lead one. Hellion (Terra/Arch) will lead another. The RP would start out with each mentor training their groups. Early on, they'll meet a new ally and enemy.​
    What's an RP without the bad guys? The bad guys will be similar.​
    Something will happen that causes the X-Men to split up into teams with each mentor leading them.​
    Professor X, Magneto and a select few people will be off limits. The RP will be restricted to X-Men characters and mutants, though the rest of the Marvel universe exists.​
    For the X-Men, the only pre-existing characters will be the mentors. I will make rare exceptions, though, so ask if you really want a pre-existing character.That means every other good character will be an OC mutant trainee.​
    For the bad guys, the members of the team can be either OC or pre-existing.​
    I'll introduce the two inter-dimensional mutants after they arrive.​
    Rules:
    1. First and foremost: Don't powerplay, don't godmod, etc. (Even though it's hard in this kind of RP)
    2. You don't have to be a hardcore comic book fan or even X-Men fan to join. Hell, you probably don't even need to know much at all.
    3. This is a baseball game. You're the players, I'm the umpire, these are the rules. Three strikes and you're out.
    4. All of KHV's rules apply here.
    5. 20 words minimum per post.
    6. Don't worry about perfect grammar and spelling, but be decent at it. If you know you have a problem with it, you can always go to Microsoft Word, post there, get rid of the squiggly lines, and copy and paste it into here.
    7. Keep romance teenish. I don't mind if you imply or make innuendos, but take the explicit stuff somewhere else (not really my rule but the site's. I will enforce it, though)
    8. Swearing is allowed. As long as it ****ing isn't every ****ing word, you ****ing ****s. Also, if you swear, try not to get censored. Asterisks just throw off the flow of a post for me.
    9. If you're taking a break or quitting, let someone know, preferably me. I don't mind giving recaps.
    10. Characters can be any age (be reasonable)
    11. Characters don't have to stay either good or bad or even on the team they start on.
    12. Four characters max. No more than two in the same squad.
    13. OOCs are fine as long as it isn't longer than the BIC.
    14. If you're confused about powers (or anything in general), ask me for help.
    15. Put pictures in spoiler tags when making characters.
    16. I will break my own rules many times (most likely godmodding or powerplaying). This is done for plot purposes. I will most likely let you do it occasionally (and maybe even ask you to).
    17. If I add rules later, I'll let you know.
    *New Mutants*
    The New Mutants are the name given to mutants studying at the X-Institute who aren't X-Men yet. These are the ones being trained and are usually younger than the X-Men. The New Mutants are split into two groups. The Paragons are led by Julian Keller, a.k.a. Hellion and X-Force is led by Scott Summers, a.k.a. Cyclops. In this RP, the New Mutants are all Original Characters. All New Mutants have the same uniform.
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    -The Brotherhood of Evil Mutants-
    The Brotherhood of Evil Mutants, or the Brotherhood for short, is a team led by Max Eisenhardt, better known as Magneto. Magneto believes mutants are the rightful rulers of the world and collects like-minded mutants to achieve his dream. The Brotherhood lives in a run-down house on the outskirts of town (Think X-Men: Evolution if you've seen it) while Magneto leads them from elsewhere. Currently, Magneto has disappeared and has left the Brotherhood to their own devices. More of a loose alliance under Magneto than an actual team, the Brotherhood mutants do not share a uniform.
    OOC Form
    Username: <Your forum username. Put either your current or most-known username>
    Real Name: <Your character's birth/legal name>
    Alias: <Your character's codename. For example, Scott Summers' is Cyclops>
    Age: <How old is your character?>
    Squad: <X-Force, Paragons, or Brotherhood. If a third squad is added, then you have until we start the RP to change, if you wish.>
    Appearance: <Your character's normal appearance. Put pictures, preferably in a link or spoiler, or a detailed description>
    Other Appearance: <If your character has a costume or a strange appearance due to his/her powers, that goes here. If your character is something like Beast where the powered appearance is the permanent one, that goes in the above slot, not here>
    Personality: <Brief overview on how your character acts/thinks>
    Biography: <Brief overview of your character's life>
    Powers: <DETAILED explanation on your character's powers. Put in spoilers and bullet format, please.>
    Other: <Anything you want to add? Do so here.>
    NOTES: No telepaths (mind reading, mind control, etc.). Telekinetics (moving things with your mind) is fine. No Omega-level mutants, unless they can't use their full powers (like Iceman). It's fine if you use powers from another X-Men or any other comic character (regardless if it's Marvel or not) as long as you don't use the character. Secondary mutations are fine (so it's fine if your character has two completely different powers. Emma Frost is a telepath who can turn to diamond lol). If your affiliation is X-Force or Paragons, you won't automatically be in that squad. I'll keep your choice in mind, but will assign your characters myself to make sure the numbers are even. If you join with somebody and want to be in their squad, just ask.

    • Led by Cyclops (Boy Wonder)​
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      Scott 'Slim' Summers was born the middle child of three mutant brothers. All three use energy-based powers. Though Scott is the only one that's currently an X-Man, the other two have been at some point. Scott was the second student enrolled in the X-Institute, but the first X-Men recruited. He was part of the First Class of X-Men, alongside his then-crush and now-wife, Jean Grey. As a child, he suffered a head injury that resulted in him being unable to control his powers, optic blasts. Anytime his eyes are open, he shoots a red beam of energy. Because of that, he constantly wears his red visor made of ruby-quartz, a mineral that counters his powers and keeps his blasts within his eyes. Scott has been an X-men the longest and is the deputy leader. He currently leads the X-Force training squad. He has made his secret identity public long ago and serves as the public liaison between the X-Men and the general public when Professor X can't. Cyclops' lineage is famous for its strong, mutant genetics.
      Powers: Cyclops has the power to fire a blast of ruby-colored energy from his eyes. The blast is concussive (it hits, not burns or cuts) and continuous. He can focus the blast to the point where he can cut a hole in a dime. Because of a head injury, anytime his eyes are open, the blast comes out, forcing him to wear sunglasses or a visor made of ruby-quartz, the only mineral that keeps the blasts in his eyes (I'm not going to explain the specific details of it lol). His powers came with the uncanny ability to comprehend angles and trigonometry with such skill that he can aim his blast off objects and 'bank shot' his targets.
      None Yet~

    • Led by Hellion (Aiden Pearce)​
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      Julian Keller is a recent graduate of the X-Institute and the newest addition to the official X-Men roster. He was always the black sheep of his family, but he wasn't rejected when his powers surfaced. Instead, his parents simply advised him to keep his powers secret. When he insisted on making them public, they sent him to the Institute. As a student, he was trained in the Hellions squad and eventually became their leader. Because of this, when he finally graduated, he chose the name Hellion. He has just became trusted with his own squad. He has no experience being a mentor, but plenty of experience being a leader. Like Cyclops, his identity is public, though it's because of his time as a student. As Hellion, he leads the Paragon squad.
      Powers: Hellion is a first-class telekinetic. He can move solid matter with his mind. His powers are sharpened to the point where he can fly, create telekinetic shields, unleash powerful blasts of telekinetic force and manipulate objects from a distance. At his fastest speed, he can fly at twice the speed of sound, though the physical strain on his body is extreme. He is able to control his telekinesis on the molecular level, able to send a telekinetic blast through someone without harming them and hit whatever is behind them.


      Username: Boy Wonder
      Real Name: Jonah "Terry" Terrance
      Alias: Wolfman/Lycan
      Age: 19
      Appearance: Click Here
      Other Appearance: Wolfman. Lycan
      Personality: Confident and ready for action. Likes to be "on top" and to win. Perhaps because of his "werewolf" personality, Jonah likes to wear as few clothes as possible.
      Biography: Jonah was 15 when his mutant power first started to develop, though it was a full two years before he realized it. Jonah was a werewolf, but one who got his powers from the X-Gene, not the actual werewolf race. Jonah's powers caused him to turn to a werewolf every time he fell asleep for extended periods of time. He lived in a relatively small city and, because he didn't realize he was a werewolf at night, started believing in the "Wolfman" that kept being spotted at night. Jonah always tried to stay awake and look for him, but the Wolfman (obviously) never appeared while Jonah was awake. After the first year and a half, the Wolfman turned violent and attacked people. After being shot several times by police after one such attack, the Wolfman escaped and took refuge in an abandoned house. Jonah woke up that morning, fully healed but with his clothes bloody and filled with bullet holes. Suddenly, all his memories as the Wolfman came back. Ever since then, he was always conscious of what was happening while mutated, but had no control over his body. He kept it a secret while he tried to find a way to control the beast within, but had no success.
      After a few more months, Jonah was visited by the X-Men who finally detected him using Cerebro. Unfortunately, this was at night. The X-Men had trouble subduing the wolfed out Jonah, as his body was extremely powerful. Jonah even showed an ability to blast energy to combat Cyclops. After Wolverine slashed him, Jonah mysteriously reverted to normal with a nosebleed and red eyes. Upon further examination, it was revealed that Jonah had a unique allergy to Adamantium, the metal bonded to Wolverine's bones. Cyclops offered to help Jonah and Jonah enrolled in the institute after Professor X erased the entire town's memory of the "Wolfman." The X-Men used Professor X's resources to make two Adamantium charms for Jonah. As long as he wore these charms, he wouldn't mutate. With their training, Jonah learned to mutate on purpose, but still had his accidental mutations. Jonah was a danger to train because his mutant power was a transformation and he wasn't in control when transformed. Fortunately, Jonah soon developed a secondary mutation where he could access his werewolf persona in a more humanoid body and be in control at a cost of his strength. He still uses his uncontrollable werewolf form sometimes, but only in drastic situations since he can't control its violent urges. He goes by the codename Wolfman after what his hometown used to call him, but his uncontrollable werewolf form (the one the town actually knew) is nicknamed Lycan because "it sounds more monster-like, ya know?"
      Powers:

      The ability to turn into one of two werewolf forms. He stays in control of his Wolfman body, even though it isn't as strong as his Lycan form. As Lycan, Jonah becomes violent, sadistic, and more animalistic, preferring to stay on all four legs. He can't tell friend from foe, but still retains some intelligence. Lycan is an Alpha-leveled mutant, twice as strong and twice as fast as Wolfman. His "Energy Howl" can devastate an entire building as Lycan while Wolfman's is more of a concussive blast. Jonah "shift" forms at will, but also shifts unwillingly at times, usually when sleeping or emotional. As long as his body is in contact with Adamantium, he'll shift into the controllable Wolfman form which is why he keeps his necklace on constantly. His powers are completely independent of the moon or time of day. His Wolfman transformation is instant, but it takes a minute or two to transform into Lycan because Terry tries to resist it.
      Wolfman's Powers
      • A humanoid wolf form.
      • Regenerative Healing Factor - Able to heal wounds quicker than a normal person.
      • Sharp claws and fangs that can tear through trees easily.
      • Fast enough to keep up with most cars.
      • Extremely durable skin to the point where he can survive Cyclop's unfocused blasts without flinching.
      • Strong enough to be able to throw a regular-sized car several yards.
      • Enhanced senses (Sight, taste, smell, and hearing)
      • Extremely agile.
      • Energy Howl - Shoots a blast of white energy from his mouth, usually accompanied by a howl. It could be compared to Cyclops' optic blast, but not as powerful as he can't aim it or focus it.
      Lycan's Powers
      • A more beast-like animal form. Lycan is able to stand on his hind-legs, but is usually on all fours.
      • A more efficient and quicker healing factor.
      • Claws and fangs sharp enough to cut through steel. He also gets the addition of horns.
      • Extremely resistant to pain, able to ignore the shock of it.
      • Able to throw cars with one hand easily.
      • Senses are even more enhanced.
      • More agile.
      • Energy Howl - The blast is wider and stronger, being able to level an entire building
      • Different personality. Jonah can't control himself as Lycan. He becomes extremely dark, quiet, violent, sadistic, animalistic, and unable to tell friend from foe most of the time.
      Other: He likes to be called "Terry," short for his last name. I swear, I made him without thinking of Wolfsbane once, even if the powers are really similar.

    • Username: Boy Wonder
      Real Name: Johnny Bloom
      Alias: Scorch
      Age: 18
      Appearance: Click Here
      Personality: Extremely sadistic. Tends to make bad jokes and puns. Enjoys torturing people and has no problem with murder. He's admitted that his change in personality might be because his powers may have "melted part of [his] brain."
      Biography: Johnny is no stranger to hate crimes. He was the average skinny kid in school that was constantly bullied for his unnatural pink hair, his slightly effeminate attitude, and his own confusion about his sexuality. When he was 16, he was jumped in an alley on his way home. The bully kept calling him "flamer," accusing Johnny of being gay. Johnny's powers developed when he tried to defend himself and, ironically, his body temperature instantly increased to over 600 degrees Fahrenheit. His personality instantly changed as well. When the bully freaked out, Johnny grabbed and cornered him. He grabbed him by the face and sadistically said, "Guess you were right," before kissing the other boy on the lips. As he did, he burned the skin off the boy's face before lighting him on fire and killing him. Johnny soon went on the run, adopting the name Scorch. When a mutant-hating Senator who was famous for using demonizing slurs proposed a bill that would require all mutants to register, Scorch set his sights on him. During a press conference where the Senator tried to push his bill, Scorch snuck up behind him, put his hand over the Senator's mouth and told him, "Stop spewing that crap. Never talk again!" and seared the Senator's lips shut. He quickly found himself attacked by the authorities, but was rescued by the Brotherhood of Evil Mutants who had planned to assassinate the Senator that day. The Brotherhood enjoyed the job Scorch did on the Senator and recruited him. The senator's allies tried to use the attack as more reason to pass the bill but mutant rights activist like Professor X, Henry McCoy (otherwise known as Beast), and others instead convinced the government to consider Scorch and the Brotherhood criminals instead of condemning all of mutant kind to punishment. To this day, Scorch enjoys the attention he gets because of his actions.
      Powers:Scorch is similar to the Human Torch of the Fantastic Four, or the complete opposite of Iceman. He has the ability to control heat and even generate flames.
      • Able to create fire out of thin air. Though he can't control the fire, he can contain it or help it expand.
      • Able to burn out the oxygen in a small room.
      • Has a constant body temperature of roughly 400 degrees F, though he can raise to over 700.
      • He can send blasts of heat ranging from 90 degrees to 2000 degrees Fahrenheit (able to melt most metals)
      • Can cause his body to smoke, usually for "gassing" or "blinding" purposes.
      • His body is immune to heat and cannot be burned.
      Other: He is outfitted with extremely fire-resistant clothes. He got the tattoo on his face upon joining the Brotherhood because he wanted to look more menacing.

     
  2. Bushy "Don't think. Imagine!"

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    You can be sure as hell I'm joining up again. Been waiting so long for this RP to be rebooted. XD
    I'll use Pulse like I did last time.



    Username: Bushy Brow
    Real Name: Ellie Holmes
    Alias: Pulse
    Age: 15
    Squad: Paragons
    Appearance:
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    Personality: Ellie is generally a calm and kind girl, who tries to do her best to make the best of a situation. She can be timid at times, but when she has her mind set on something and is determined... you can be sure that she won't quit on her friends. She would rather die than do that.
    Biography: Ellie was raised in a normal environment, by a normal family, with two sisters (one older, one younger) and a younger brother. She went to a normal school and just enjoyed life.
    With her type of personality and cute looks, she was fairly popular.
    Her powers surfaced one day when a boy started flirting with her and that boy's girlfriend noticed and started a fight with poor Ellie. Having hardly any experience in direct confrontation of that sort... Ellie panicked and before she knew it, the girl was on the floor unconscious... electrocuted.
    Not understanding what had happened... but somehow in her heart knowing the truth... she was like the others... the ones that had been on the news... she ran.
    She ran away... not knowing where she was going, but knowing she had to run.
    She was later found by the X-men and taken to a school for people like her.
    A school for the gifted. Ellie is now getting by as a new student trying to gain control of her powers, in which recently another has surfaced but she can't control it that well yet.
    Powers:
    • Electrokinesis- Through mutation of the bio-electric currents in her body... Ellie has become immune to electricity and has also gained the ability to control it freely. She can generate her own electricity from her body and also use electricity from sources around her. This power has found other useful appliances too; by channeling the bio-electric current in her body, she can use it to manipulate cell-growth rate and as such has minor regenerative abilities.
    • Invisibility-**Ellie's secondary power. She can appear invisible via the manipulation of the light around her. Currently she finds it next to impossible to do it in broad daylight, but she has no problem using and maintaining this power from the shadows where there is less light to focus on.
    Other: Ellie seems to have an unnatural (but none mutant) ability at reading people, she can tell when someone is upset even if they are hiding it well. She can also usually discern when someone is lying. Generally, she can tell a lot about a person from the first meeting too.
     
  3. jackdaniel0 Twilight Town Denizen

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    Real Name: Jack Fanzin
    Alias: Poke
    Age: 14
    Squad: X-Force
    Appearance: The coat's red and hooded, the t-shirt inside is black. From the waistdown, he wears dark blue jeans and these shoes.
    Personality: A fun-loving young boy, Jack likes to look on the brighter side of life, but he's not optimistic. He loves to joke around, and is happy when other people are. It's hard to make him sad and/or angry, but he knows when to get serious. Simple way to anger him, hurt his friends. But you do that, you better run.


    Biography: A normal boy(so far), Jack went to school, went home, went on internet, ate, slept, repeat. But an incident changed it all.
    On the way back from a summer trip from Florida, an electric storm split the plane in half, killing many people. Jack was probably the only survivor, and he survived the crash and electrocution, thanks to his superhuman qualities. He ran the way back to Manhattan, learning more and more about his powers on the way. Then, he found the mutant school, where he would be enrolled to further control his powers.
    Powers:
    • Stronger Muscle and Skeletal Structure: He didn't realize it, but he started to develop this around the age 12, which was a year before the plane crash. He could poke a middle-aged man and knock him out. He can survive and lift at most five hundred pounds, run 50 mph, and jump up to at most a height of 20 feet, but those are his limits, and even then, it takes a lot of effort to get up to them. He prefers to be careful, only exerting less than half of what he can really do. He can train himself to exceed these limits, but it definitely won't be easy for him.
    Other:
     
  4. CrownMoksha Decimo

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    Username: Master of Keyblades
    Real Name: Zeke Caster
    Alias: Flare
    Age: 15
    Squad: X-Force
    Appearance: Click
    Other Appearance: Burst
    Personality: Reckless and a little but lazy are words generally used to describe him.
    Biography: Zeke lived a pretty normal life. He went to school and did all of the things an average teen would do. The thing that set him apart was that he was born with a unique power over light, though he had little control over it. The few times he did try to use it was usually in the shape of a ball, but it always ended up blowing up in his face. Zeke was never able to fully utilize his skill until he was given a special pair of gloves from his father. What his father never told him was that his special gift that appeared in his bloodline once every two generations. So, seeking help from Professor Xavier, Zeke was now able to better control his powers. Still lacked proper training though. Seeking to compensate for that, he decided to look for the school for mutants run by Professor Xavier.
    Powers:
    • Light Manipulation - With the help of his gloves, Zeke is able to use the light housed within his body in any way depending on the situation. Anything from projectiles of light to a temporary shield is at his disposal.
    • Burst - Normally signaled by a small flame appearing on his forehead, this allows Zeke to temporally enhance his natural powers, but is only usable for a short time.
    Other: Burst normally last for 5 minutes or one powerful attack.

    Might make a Paragon later.
     
  5. Doukuro Chaser

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    Real Name: Alyssa Cole
    Alias: Nix
    Age: 17
    Squad: Paragons
    Appearance: 1 | 2
    Personality: Nix believes in many mythological things, thus the name choice, and likes to believes instead of simple mutations that maybe they are supernatural things instead. These thoughts are left at just that though, thoughts never to be shared aloud. This is due to a serve lack of self-esteem that also keeps most thoughts locked up. And since Nix rarely speaks up not many know of their longing to be more water-like and therefore not bound to either gender. This leaves them known mostly as a girl which causes frustration nearly all the time, therefore causing an unbalance in emotions that can lead to random outbursts and breakdowns. The only bit of solace Nix gets is when they are practicing their talents, which is also the only thing Nix is able to take pride in. So if it is said that their abilities are lacking or anything of the sort it is hard to keep training. On the flip side any bit of praise is a good motivator.
    Biography: Once Alyssa's parents discovered that their child had strange abilities they opt'd to keeping their kid away from everyone else, home schooling Alyssa and keeping other family members away. Thanks to this Alyssa never formed proper relationships and remained distant from her parents, thus growing up believing she could never be apart of normal society. On top of that she later decided she wasn't exactly a she, nor a he, but continued referring to herself as a girl to ease her parents' minds as they never grew to understand. Though once they sent her to the school for mutants, thinking it would fix things, she was able to find a new name, that name being Nix, and is beginning to accept the fact she is androgynous. Since then she started going by a singular they rather than she, or other alternatives. However Nix is okay with being called either he or she so long as the person accepts the fact that they are neither or least tries to understand. Though it wouldn't hurt if they switched it up a bit, if they chose to use he and she. It is rare for Nix to state any of this though.
    Powers:
    • Water Manipulation: Control over water.
    • Water Mimicry: The ability to turn one's body into water. Nix is only just learning this so it is at novice level for the start of the RP.
    • Water Affinity: Increases one's senses, abilities, speed, etc when near water. However starting out it only works for Nix while they are in water. As it progresses it could just be whenever bodies of water are near. And of course the more water the better power boost it will give.
    Other:
     
  6. Boy Wonder Dark Phoenix in Training

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    Everyone's accepted with two conditions: master of keyblades, how did Zeke's father create the gloves? You should include Professor X's help somehow ((like in X-Men Evolution how he created the holographic watch for Nightcrawler, if you've seen that). jackdaniel0, your character is too strong. You can't have all three of those powers nor have them as powerful as they are right away.
     
  7. jackdaniel0 Twilight Town Denizen

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    Yeah, sorry, I got a bit carried away. How bout now? If it's still not alright, could you be more specific about what to take out?
     
  8. Bushy "Don't think. Imagine!"

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    Personally, I think you need to cut the elemental control entirely.
    Most mutants only have like one power, two if anything more.
    Look at Scott Summers for example. He only has laser eyes. Does that make him weak? No. He's very powerful, he's just specialized himself in that ability.

    For one, the way you've written his powers is so vague it gives him a lot of flexibility (which isn't a bad thing at times, but in this case there is too much). You need to be more concise.
    Try to think of a way a power gives other benefits instead of giving the one character loads of different powers.

    For example: The super strength. Now I can see that as well as making him super strong, he'd naturally be very tough due to his muscle density and the like. So he'd be more durable and so on. That could perhaps increase other things like strength would naturally give him more distance when jumping and so on. But be reasonable about it too. Keep in mind that our mutants are new mutants. They haven't mastered their powers etc, and they still have a lot of development to go through.
    Give yourself a place to rise too. If you start out at 100% in the RP, you've got nowhere to go and level up to as the RP goes on.

    This brings me to my next point.
    It is very rare a mutant has their powers at birth. Most develop it during puberty or during childhood where cases of extreme stress and the like draw out the latent abilities, like consider Magneto and how his powers awoke when he was being torn away from his mother at the concentration camps.
    Meanwhile, some examples of mutants with powers from birth include Mystique and Nightcrawler, but yeah.
    You might want to reconsider when he got his powers.


    Frankly, it's up to you. These are just some guidelines I thought of when I looked at your character sheet.
    As I said, I think the thing you need to work on more for this is to be concise and tone it down for the start of the RP.

    A good example of a character sheet to look at would be Nilin's.
    She's stuck to one power theme, which is water and looked at the various ways she can work with it. She's given herself plenty of limitations to the power too. Not just the natural limitations of water, but she's also looked into how her character's inexperience would effect it and how it can later grow into more expert control.

    Either way, I hope that helps and I wish you luck.
     
  9. jackdaniel0 Twilight Town Denizen

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    To be honest, I dont remember putting in the 'at birth' part. I toned it down now, thanks for the help.
     
  10. CrownMoksha Decimo

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    Username: Master of Keyblades
    Real Name: Alex Rhodes
    Alias: Zero
    Age: 17
    Squad: Paragon
    Appearance: Click
    Other Appearance: Flame Resistant Cloak, Full Body Armor
    Personality: Relaxed most of the time, but knows when to get serious.
    Biography: Ever since the day Alex ran away from home, nothing seemed to go right for him. Since he had a limited amount of cash on him, he had to spend wisely. So he bought a pack of cards. It was a huge gamble, but he figure if he was lucky he could make come cash with them, and so he did. He seemed to have an incredible winning streak on his hand and nothing went wrong. That is, until one of the people he beat came back wanting his money. Under normal circumstances, Alex could've handled him easily, but he came back with a group of people and they all attacked. The next thing he knew, the leader of the group was on the ground with a broken nose and his followers were running in terror. Confused, he took a look at his hand only to find that it was encased in a gauntlet that soon disappeared. With no idea what happened, he left the alley and moved on to another part of the street.
    Powers:
    • Weapon Reformation: Allows him to turn any part of his body into any weapon that he's seen. Whether it's real or from a TV show.
    • Armor Transformation: Along with weapons, he can also create armor. Though it's limited to a Flame Resistant Cloak or Full Body Armor
    Other: Though rarely used, he carries around a deck of cards


    Editied Zeke's background
     
  11. Midnight Star Master of Physics

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    Real Name: Iona Hunter
    Alias: Whisper
    Age: 17
    Squad: X-Force
    Appearance: http://images2.fanpop.com/image/pho...hen-Lin-Taiwan-fantasy-13991685-1920-1200.jpg
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    Personality: Iona is confident and not afraid to speak up when she wants to, she likes talking to people and can be very outgoing but also knows when to hold her tongue. She is very empathetic and can feel understand how other people feel, due to this she can be a very protective friend. She is loyal and once she has made a good friend, she will protect them at all costs including her life.
    Biography: Iona had a fairly normal childhood, she got bullied at school but she always just managed to get through it. She excelled at gymnastics at school and even managed to compete in competitions in it. The bullying was bad but she always got through it, she didn't let it ruin her confident appearance nor trouble anybody else with her problems. However not long after she turned 12, she was tricked and locked in a cupboard at the end of the school day and just left there. Despite shouting and banging on the door, nobody came to her rescue until suddenly when she went to bang on the door, instead of hitting it, she fell straight through it into the empty corridor. A few days after that she found herself waking up on the floor downstairs, directly below her room, having fell straight through the floor. As time went on, she found with an increasing frequency, she kept accidentally phasing through things with no control over her new powers. However since then, she has learnt how to control her powers but is still working to constantly improve.
    Powers:
    Phasing
    Iona possesses the ability to pass through solid matter by passing her atoms through the spaces between the atoms of the object through which she is moving. In this way she and the object through which she was passing could temporarily merge without interacting, and each is unharmed when she has finished passing through the object. This process was called "phasing." When Iona is phasing, she is, for all intents and purposes, intangible. Hence, when attacked, she can shift into a "phasing" state (even if she is not at the time passing through an object) so as to allow oncoming projectiles or energy blasts to pass through her harmlessly. Iona passes through objects at the same rate of speed at which she is moving before she "entered" it. She has trained herself to go automatically, by reflex, into a phasing state at any indication of danger, such as a loud noise like a gunshot, in order to protect herself. Using her phasing ability she can also:

    Air Walking: While phasing, she does not physically walk on surfaces, but rather interacts with the molecules of air above them, allowing her to ascend and descend, causing her to seemingly walk on air. She could use her ability to walk on the air from the ground to the upper stories of a building as if she were climbing a staircase.
    Phasing Extension: From the first use of her phasing power, Iona was able to phase her clothing along with herself. Through practice she has learned to phase other objects along with herself without harm to them. However, she has to maintain physical contact with the people or objects she phased along with herself for the effect to work with this other person or object.
    Electrical Disruption: The use of her abilities also interferes with any electrical systems as she passes through by disrupting the flow of electrons from atom to atom, including the bio-electric systems of living bodies if she concentrates in the right way. This typically causes machines to malfunction or be destroyed as she phases through them, and can induce shock and unconsciousness in living beings.
    Telepathic Resistance: Her thoughts are highly erratic when phased as if there was no mind to telepathically affect.

    Other: Solidifying when inside a object will injure her or even kill her. (She could harm someone by phasing with someone and losing contact with them while they were passing through an object)
     
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    MoK and Midnight are accepted~
    If we don't get bad guys soon, I'm trolling everybody with a Brotherhood composed of Deadpool, Magneto, Apocalypse, Mister Sinister, and every other Big Bad from the X-Men.


    I like the way it is now, actually, but I don't like how strong he is with his powers now. Instead of saying he run 50mph, jump that high, and all that before exceeding the limit, make it something like those are his limits so he's usually a lot weaker than that (like...25mph, normally?). Or you can make him like a character in Marvel named Alpha who can project energy, fly, create a forcefield around himself, super strength, and super speed, BUT could only use one ability at a time and had to switch between them, which wasn't instant.
     
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    Well actually, I meant to say those were his limits anyway. Hopefully it sounds more suitable.
     
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    I heard Deadpool mentioned and now I'm interested.

    Kidding, but I am interested in joining up again. Still have to decide if I'm going to go with the same OC I did before or a new one, so give me a couple of days to figure stuff out and I'll fill in a sheet.
     
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    I was going to make Nix Brotherhood so editing that now.
     
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    Nightcrawler, Wenn Sie bitte. Or Wolverine could do alright, Bub.
    I might do a student before this really kicks off, but for now, I'd really rather teach. And not to worry, I know these characters well; I can portray them believably.​
     
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    Accepted. Just make sure not to godmod/powerplay.
    I knew you'd come back xD I'll be impatiently waiting for you~
    You don't have to! But if you really do, that's fine as well~
    I probably wasn't clear enough, but no other pre-existing X-Men besides Cyclops and Hellion will be allowed. At least, not this early in the story. If you want an X-Men, it'll have to be an OC New Mutant in one of the two squads under Hellion's or Cyclops' leadership. Pre-existing bad mutants are alright, though.

    Also, did you mean "can portray them" instead of "can't?" lol
     
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    Well the way I made Nix was so they could end up on either side... But makes more sense for her to be turned I suppose so changing back but may make another character in that case. Actually, yeah when Nix was made I was struggling between two ideas so will go through with both. Will post the second cs soon.
     
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    Point A: Yeah, I scoured the rules for the answer before I posted, and all I could find was that Prof X and Magneto plus some others were off limits. Sorry about that.
    Point B: Can't... huh... I'm a little stunned by the fact I put the ' between the n and the t. Sorry about that.
     
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    Oh that's weird, uh, I thought powerplay meant not to use attacks twice in a row, kinda in like a mash button game, but now the dictionary says it is the same as godmodding. Which does it mean?
     
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