One more Angel in Heaven

Two pawns stand on the empty street

Each locked in warfare,
Yet neither has made a move.

A bail of tumbleweed floats
Across the desert chessboard,

the sun stands directly above;
Unbiased over the dueling men.

The clock tower strikes,
Noon.
Two bullets rocket forwards,
Both gracing casings as the targets are hit.

Both men collapse.
The Spaniard, dead.
The respected Texan lay,
Dying.

He blinks, his clean white Stetson
Smeared with sweat and dust falls to the ground,
His iconic badge layered in droplets of blood.

The bystanders remain in audience, shocked and saddened
But a young child marches toward him
She kneels down and lifts his head.

He blinks into the burning sun,
The face of an angel gazing down at him with a single tear in her eye.
He passes with a smile on his face,


You are safe now.

 

xD....Did you mean safe?

Despite that it's still good. Wow, very deep too. It gives me a clear picture.

It's good but not your best.

And it has a hilarious grammar error xD;

Good job.
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oops haha well now that the girl is SAFE. I agree it's not one of my best, but i was watching a western and what can you do?

 

I like it very deep