(authers note: i read stroy similiar to this. it gave me ideas!!!! and along came this stroy!!! it's alot of poeple and what happenes to them when something with kingdom hearts coames to life ^^) [perface] Jessica was waken by her little sis. She wanted so much to back to sleep, but to make Dani happy she went to see wht it was. "Jessie look it's a metor shower!" Dani pointed out. Sure enough, there was thousand of blue comets flying through the sky. It was beatiful, more beatiful then a dozzen red roses. Make a wish Dani, I wish that Kingdom Hearts was real!" She whispered. Knowing it wasn't coming true, Jessie went back to sleep. Both sisters didn't seem about 19 red body shape comets fall from all over the sky land ing all over the world. Her wish came true.
Ah, similar to my beginning. Althought it's a good beginning, the blue comets I can imagine that. Keep going with this, it's really interesting, keeping me happy:) Also the title sounds awesome, when I saw it I got excited:D
ohhh, that really good to hear!!!! i read your begining and liked it!!!! i'm realy glad you like it!!!!
Mexony's story is inspired by this one. wow, i'm glad that people want me to continue!!!! i'm so glad!! XD
Kingdom Heart Chapter 1Jessica walked out side. It was a cool, breezy day. Nice day to fight your sister. "Dani, do you want to fight?" she called out. The 13 year-old walked to the backyard, picking up a stick. She swung around debating rather to use it or not. "Sure why not!" A girl ,small for her age, came out to where Jessie was. They started their fight. They where in the middle when a black creature jumoed in between. The yellow eyes scanning. "Heartless!" They both yelled. Jessie being more expriesed, got an other stick. Dani ran to the dog canel. Jessica ws defeating them nicely, but for every 3 she defeated 5 more came. "AHHHH!" Jessie screamed. She was hit in the back. The wounded girl fell to her knees in pain. If i had a potion or something." Then she remembered the green orbs. She started fighting again. Jackie got up unwilling. Jack was still asleeping. The twins live in Calfornia. The girl got dress in blue shorts, pink tank top, and black flip-flops Jackie got a weird feeling about today. Something bad. She thought abput what it could be as she wole up Jack up. "What time is it?" He asked rolling over. The girl looked at the clock it was 9:30. "It's 9:30, lazy bum!" Jackie snapped.She picked that up from her favrite game. The tomboy walked out of the room to play it. After half a hour. All she had to do was defeat Xemnas 3 times. She beat him like 3 thouhsand times. "This should be easy!" Jackie said to the TV. "Espcally sence i have Riku an my side!" she was about to conutine when her phone rang. "Hello!" the anger teen said. She hated when she got interuppeted. All of sudden her friend started to speach gibberish. "Slow down, Alyssa, Now what about black things." ~~~~~~~~~~ Treah joged in the nice sun light. His blonde hair leaning forward (as usual), ans his orage shirt drenched in sweet. Being in Taxes that was the style for the sport boys. Soething caught his eye. Something black was attacking a gilr with...a jumprope? He looked around for a weapon. A car bumper was handy. He picked it up, and helped the jumperope girl. They both were good. "Finally those creatures stop." Jumprope girl sighed. She turned sround to face her helper. Treah was shocked. she lookes a lot like like Selphanie, the girl from the video games. "But she looks different, younger." The sports buy thought. Then he rememberd Kingdom Hearts. Thnak you...er" She paused, because she didn't know what to call him. "Treah, Selphanie, my names Treah." Sports boy said. Jumprope was srunned that he know her name. Ahe didn't even tell him that.
That was really good but what I recommend is to use WordPerfect or any programs you might have that can let you type.This reason is because there were a lot of miss spellings and grammar.WordPerfect will help you with spelling and grammar.If you spelled a word incorrectly that word will get underlined with red.But I'm sure you know that. Love the story so far:)
