[Got your attention? Good. Now, get your hand out of your zipper, because it's a new mixtape by me. It's DOPE AS HELL. It features mostly beats by Pogo. Let me know what you think.] Here's the DL link! http://hulkshare.com/5bpj5y68hxva HOT GIRL-GIRL ACTION. LET'S GET TO 250 DLs, KHV.
Will leave commentary when I finish the DL and listen to it. I am very much interested in this. EDIT: I like it overall, which is a lot coming from me, since I only like a few rappers. My favorite song on this mixtape is a tie between Lost and Splurgenshitter. During the faster sections of the first two tracks, you sound like you're really struggling for breath, which is natural and not a terrible thing, but if you could somehow hide that a bit more, it'd make the quality a tad better. I'm no rapper, though; I wouldn't know how doable that is. My only other criticism is that in general you seem to rely a little bit too much on the remixed songs as opposed to letting your voice be more of the driving force on each track. The lyrics all around are pretty nice. I liked the Fullmetal Alchemist reference in "Alice." Very nice touch. In general, this is a pretty damn good mixtape. Hope you get some recognition for it.
Should we leave commentary here? I mean it's the Spam Zone... EDIT: Love Alice. Love Lost. Splurgenshitter is <3 Also, for my comments...this is very unique. Whoever made the compositions has definitely got my attention. I'm not very into the rap; it's not mixed into the whole meat of the songs. It's like it wasn't blended enough. I also agree with Advent, raps need practice. I think you're pretty good at them, but you need to time them perfectly. I remember when I went to a studio, they kept stopping every time because I kept getting out of time. It's important that you blend with the whole track. I suggest a bit more reverb and doubled vocals. It's important that some mastering is done...regardless of how measly. In this whole thing, it feels like the tracks need some compression and stereo expansion. Some EQ can do wonders too. Mastering is what makes the songs commercially ready, so it's a very important step. Overall, I think the beats are very unique for rap, and very attractive. The only thing that sticks out of the whole mix is your voice, which needs some reverb, which I think would fit this mixtape perfectly, and some practice in the raps which sometimes sounded out of time. Splurgenshitter is the only one that seems to blend a bit better than other tracks, because compared to others this one is actually dependent on your voice. Other tracks may actually benefit from a bit better blending. I think you did amazing...this thing is gonna be on my iTunes. I'm really interested in Pogo now.
