Digital Art OMFG Lightning strikez omg run! =o

CnC. Real CnC. Kinda not done so give me some ideas of what to add and what to change, kthnxbai~

 

well im no expert....but let me give you ideas.

the stock...seems fishy...i cant pinpoint what it is...but there's something wrong with it.

another thing....the effects placed on her sword....are really nice, but you should not blur her weapon too much.

try to move the focus more from the weapon...just a little bit.

hope that helped.

 

It'a awesome but Lightning's face is a little too dark.

 

....this is not REAL CnC....when typing this thread I almost put "Real CnC. Not 'I liek it but -insert element of tag here- is -insert some ****-"

Chervalier, thank you for the CnC. Yours was helpful.

 

Stock looks a little grainy on her face, that or you resized it bad o-o, don´t blur the pentool, in my opinion it messes with the depth, work a little more on the colors, maybe some orange hues =\, and add a lighting/Darken the sides of the tag.

It´s nice, but it still needs some adjustments there and there =\.

 

Actualy I didn't blur the pentool, it just came out that way o____o
And as for resizing, it took me a while to get it the way it is, it first it was like barf >,>
But thanks for the CnC. I'll edit this post with an updated version.

UPDATE BIATCH

 

pentooling on the left....buh-bye.....

and if u can, get rid of the greenish outline on the render.....

 

for the lightining set it to addition and set smaller pentool marks that go off of it, then it would look like real lightning, add some cliping masks, or with the blur tool, blur over where the sword is because the sharpness is bugging me

 

Thanks for the CnC. I'll try to put it to good use.

I'll have to figure out how to set it to addition >.>
When I did the pentooling I wasn't even trying to make it look like lightning but I'll try it xD
And I just figured out how to make a clipping mask with CS2 so I'l try that to and I'll blur the sword a bit as well. Thanks for the CnC.