That's pretty nice actually. Try to work on the little white bits around the edges though. It's quite distracting. For me anyway. I'm fussy.
I love everyone's expressions here. It looks really sleek in the first few then it starts to get grainy, but I won't detract from you since I think that's the manga's fault. Overall, well done. :3
This made me laugh. :lolface: When you shown me what you had so far; I didn't even notice Al in the background. But until you colored him I noticed. Good job. :3