Ode to Kingdom Hearts

Discussion in 'Archives' started by Clawtooth, Dec 15, 2007.

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  1. Clawtooth Keelah se'lai!

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    Kingdom hearts where is my heart?
    And, oh, whenever will you start,
    To give us nobodies back our existance?
    Do you need much more assistance?


    Are you darkness or are you light?
    And why do so many people fight,
    To gain control over you, my love?
    You're clearly mine up high above


    I am the weilder of the blade,
    Boy, I could muder some lemonade,
    Anyway I'm your protector,
    I get rid of the bad guys from your sector!


    I am the king of a great realm,
    And you are the keeper fo it as well,
    You are the heart of all the world,
    Oh sorry! worlds! My mind mind's unfurld


    I am the Last princess of heart,
    The one called Kairi but that apart,
    We are both the ultra-pure,
    Up in near the sky and sea azure.


    All these people for good or ill,
    Are curteous and show good will,
    So why whenever fighting starts,
    You never aid us, Kingdom Hearts?


    This was off the top of my head but I think it's good. I like the different perspectives of Xemnas, Xehanort, Mickey, Sora, Kairi and the last one... well it could be Riku...
     
  2. Very Berry Gummi Ship Junkie

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    its good but maybe change the color of the second verse cuz it was rly hard to read otheriwse nice job
     
  3. O R A N G E C is the heavenly option

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    Lol, it sums up KH pretty well.


    I like how you made the colors sort of match the verses.

    Good job.
     
  4. Nymph of Destiny Chaser

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    Awesome job! Love the color changes, great work! :) :glomp:​
     
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