Digital Art Obito Signature! (My First Proper Sig)

Discussion in 'Arts & Graphics' started by Jⱥy, Apr 29, 2011.

  1. Jⱥy King's Apprentice

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    Hello Guys,

    Here is a new signature i made a few hours ago. I did work pretty hard on it and spent alot of time and detail on it. I am not the best at graphic art and i am not trying to show of, i just wanted some people to see my work.

    I would really appreaciate comments on your thoughts and how i could make it better.

    Jay.


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  2. ShibuyaGato Transformation

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    You sharpened Obito quite a bit... I personally think it was overdone, but other than that it's great!
     
  3. Jⱥy King's Apprentice

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    Thankyou and it just looked too blurry if it was not sharpened xD
     
  4. Soap Hollow Bastion Committee

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    Try and find a better stock if thats the case with it. I like the effects you did with the background. Good use on text. Good color choice. The only thing i would do is lay off the sharpening or get a better stock is all that i see.
     
  5. Daxa~ #stalker

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    I like it...
    Obito really is very sharp in it,but it just makes the whole thing stand out.
    And the backround is super pretty :3
    Nice work
     
  6. Saxima [screams geometrically]

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    I really like it, and the tag 'Soul Survivor' sounds pretty good. The only thing I have to say is that Obito is a bit sharp, a little bit more blurry would work well.

    Other than that, it's awesome.
     
  7. Misty gimme kiss

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    Well, this is really good for your first signature!

    I think my biggest beef is the effects. I can see you used some nice C4Ds, and that's awesome, but try not to just paste them on and arrange them--see if you can manipulate them in some way. When I use outside resources, I think to myself, "if someone had been given the same stocks as me, could they make the same or similar signature?" It ends up taking you a lot more time, but try to make other people's resources--which are fine to use--your own. =]

    Also, I recommend this to all beginners (and even some more experienced people, heh), tutorials! There are some great ones that I can point out to you if you'd like, as well as some that can be found in our Graphics Tutorials/Help section.