I was bored. It was 4 in the morning. I just got finished watching Whale Wars. This is my poem. (I never post poetry on here, so... yeah...) I write poems all the time, but this isn't my best work. I just got a kick out of it last night. I still get a kick out of it. Tell me what you think :D Environmentalists. You drag me down You make me feel like shit For what? Your cause? HA! NICE TRY!
This barely resembles poetry and therefore I believe I cannot give relative critique. I suppose it could be described as "short and to the point" or as a "snapshot into the mind", but I think the tasteless language used and only the weakest attempt at poetic device (in the form of the repetition of the "you" and the mild rhetorics) make this piece something I cannot appreciate as a poem. On the plus side, I would like to see more from you, since you clearly enjoy creating poems. Sorry if my comments seem harsh, I am always truthful but sometimes lack the tact needed to pass on my advice harmlessly, especially when tired.
Lol, I don't even think this is any good xD Thank you for your honesty. I do plan on posting my decent ones eventually.
