Digital Art Nothing is true, Everything is permitted

Assassin's creed Brotherhood is my favorite video game. I can't wait for the new assassin's creed revelations game to come out, so why not make a sig to celebrate :)

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Some helpful CnC would be appreciated.

 

The text is whacky bad. Yeah, it'd be best if you didn't use that text. Text is very peculiar, because it can be really hit or miss. Try simpler fonts and effects on the text, and then move up from there.

The negative space(the black parts) look somewhat strange due to the effects you've got going on, they seem just a teensy bit slapped on. You have a flow there, so it may be good to smooth out the effects and make them flow a but more into the whole composition of the tag.

I like how you tried to put some depth in there, and the light looks really nice. Except for the fact that there's also some light in other parts of the picture, so you may want to play with dodge and burn tools to get a more consistent lighting. It may also be good to gradually give depth to effects by blurring from front to back, the intensity of the blur diminishing as you go.

I recommend you get a few more fractals and C4D resources to work with, and also mess a bit more with the depth, light and flow(If you're going to have flow)