NOT MY POEM (very sad)

she was only 13
Her dad was a drunk
Her mom was an addict
Her parents kept her
Locked in an attic
Her only friend
was a little toy bear
It was old and worn out
And had patches of hair
She always talked to it
When no one's around
She lays there and hugs it
Not a peep of sound
Until her parents
unlock the door
Some more and more pain
She'll have to endure
A bruise on her leg
A scar on her face
Why would she be
In such a horrible place?
But she grabs her bear
And softly crys
She loves her parents
But they want her to die
She sits in the corner
Quiet but thinking,
"Please God, why is
My life always sinking?"
Such a bad life
For a sad little kid
She'd get beaten and beaten
For anything she did
Then one night
Her mom came home high
And the poor child was beaten
As hours went by
Then her mom suddenly
Grabbed for a blade
It was sharp and pointy
One that she made
She thrusted the blade
Right in her chest,
"You deserve to die
You worthless little girl!
The mom walked out
Leaving the girl slowly dying
She grabbed her bear
And again started crying
Police showed up
At the small little house
Then quickly barged in
Everything quiet as a mouse
One officer slowly
Opened a door
To find the little girl
Lying dead on the floor
It must have been bad
To go through so much harm
But at least she died
With her best friend in her arms

 

This is the sadist poem I've ever read. D: And yet, the rhyme scheme is catchy. :3

 

...v-v Someone has to post a happy poem now.

 

a GOOD happy poem? there's no such thing...

only people that can write good poems are emotional people *cough* emos *cough* that put all their stress, hatred, sadness, and distrought into a peice of wrting.

 

It is possible to be emotional without being emo. Emos whine about everything...Its hard for me to see an emo writing this, or writing a poem like this.

 

good lord...
you DO know that emo means Emotional, right?

and my friend is emo and she writes things like this all the time...

you know there is a reason why emo people are emo... they aren't ALL spoiled little brats who think they have it hard.

 

ugh...

it is quite true that "emo" means emotional. And yes I knew that.

I was comparing "emotional" to the people who have that hair-over-eyes hair style, whine a lot make believe they have problems...etc.

if you still dont get it, substitute "emotional" for "passionate." Thats a much better word choice.

I'd rather say your friend is quite passionate, yet sad at the same time. Passionate implies reasoning and idea. Emo doesnt. It started off as a music genre...so you cant get much deeper than that.