Audio Noroz' "Remorse"

Discussion in 'Production Studio' started by Noroz, Aug 31, 2011.

  1. Noroz I Wish Happiness Always Be With You

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    Hey, so I wrote this story and I wanted to record it to see how it turned out. I got a friend of mine to listen to it, and he said it sounded good.

    Anyway, the soundfile is here


    The text, if you want to read it is here

    What I'd like to hear is not necessarily the quality of the text, but rather the way I'm narrating it. I do a bit of voiceacting and stuff like that.

    Comments are appreciated!

    -Noroz
     
  2. Glen Returned from the dead

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    Brilliant job! Not only are you great at writing, you're talented with narration too! The emotion really got to me..i mean i don't cry unless it's like a mental breakdown in the privacy of my bedroom, but this almost made me. In the words of the typical Australian stereotype, f***ing awesome work mate!
     
  3. Heart ❤ Enjoy every moment with all ya got

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    Such a romantic story <3 It almost made me cry a bit :(
    I do love your voice very much so.
    You showed such emotion :) Great job my friend :D