No Need For Memories

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    Just a notice, the characters in this story are completely original.

    ...Okay so maybe one has to be careful when saying 'orginial characters' for Kingdom Hearts, soooo to clarify, all the characters in this story are not in the actual Kingdom Heart Series.

    Two of them are my actual OCs while four are different Disney characters (...who could they be...?)

    And just a heads up, the current setting is on the FFVI world.

    Oh, and I'm open to any comments and criticism; just make sure to check out the elaboration of the characters in the second post before critiquing. I really like comments and criticism :).

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    “Brooklyn!” Crixul called out as he pointed to the entrance of a spiraling stairway, “They’re getting away!”

    “I’m on it.” Brooklyn said. A quick gust of wind swept through the large dungeon room and a red blur zoomed past Crixul, heading up the stairway. Crixul turned around and faced the remaining opponents - three four-legged beasts that resembled large wolves. But the most intriguing aspect of the beasts were that they were entirely black, so dark it seemed their bodies had no definition to them. The only thing that stood out from their all black coat was their pupil-less, yellow eyes.

    Crixul readied a stance. Between him and the beasts, they shared similar color. Crixul wore all black, from his boots, pants, gloves, even his hooded trench coat; his hood completely draped over his head, hiding his face. He stood motionless watching he three black beasts circle around him, growling hoarsely. They were trying to intimidate him. The thought of that got him smirking. They were only three heartless.

    With a snarl, a heartless behind him made a move, jumping toward him with wide open jaws filled with razor teeth. Crixul spun around, guiding his hands in front of him. At that instant a dark mist quickly accumulated in front of Crixul forming a shadowy yet solid wall. Once the heartless hopelessly slammed into the barrier, Crixul thrust his hands forward. The barrier then fired ahead, carrying the heartless with it. At a blazing speed the barrier crashed into the dungeon’s brick wall, crushing the heartless into nothing but a puff of smoke.

    At the response of the its quick death, the remaining two heartless shrilled as they both lunged for Crixul. With quick reflexes the young man knelt down and spread his arms out. Following that motion, a thick shadow poured out of his body from his boots. At the next second Crixul jumped straight up in the air. By the time the two heartless banged into each other, missing their target, Crixul hovered over 30 feet in the air just barely floating under the ceiling.

    A black miasma suddenly appeared within his surroundings and absorbed into his body. As the mist accumulated into his body, Crixul began to fall like a rock. His fists reeled back, ready to strike. The two heartless had no time to retreat. Crixul made an impact with his fists to the ground sending a massive dark shockwave that obliterating the heartless as well as causing a brief tremor.

    Crixul blew out a sigh and lifted his hood off, rubbing the sweat off his tanned forehead. Crixul’s short dark hair was all choppy from being under the hood. His dark gray eyes scanned the wide stone hall. He huffed, “Damn it Gadget, you should have been here by now.” Gadget had split up with him and Brooklyn when they rescued the prisoners. She was the only one that had memorized dungeon map therefore was the only one who could’ve guided them to safety. But that was over an hour ago. He hoped that they were alright. They should be; some of the prisoners were magi and Gadget had found the spell book to break the seal that hindered the magi of their magic abilities.

    It then came to him that he had to catch up to Brooklyn, “Crap! Brooklyn!” Crixul darted across the hall and started heading up the spiraling stairs. While fighting the heartless he didn’t realize that Brooklyn would face all three of them, not that’d stop Brooklyn and his slight degree of arrogance. The thought only made Crixul force his feet to run faster up the torchlight stairway.

    Crixul saw the faint glow of daylight while hearing noises of firepower and small explosions. Finally reaching the end of the stairs he was now outside on a high balcony. Numerous green laser beams whizzed through the air in all directions apparently trying to hit its aerial target. Up in the air, a crimson gargoyle zipped through the air swaying and dodging every green beam.

    “Crix!” The gargoyle called out warningly. Crixul glared straight across the lengthy balcony and saw that several green beams were coming right at him. Crixul threw his hands forward as a massive circular shield materialized front of him, protecting him from the concussive energy blasts. He tensed at every booming impact on his shield.

    A slight breeze blew past him as the red gargoyle, Brooklyn, landed right beside him to take immediate shelter. In his crouched stance, Brooklyn was tall as Crixul’s shoulder length, standing on his enormous clawed feet. He had a beak-like snout with his flat nose just under his eyes. His long hair was ghostly white. His tail was about the total length of his leg. The leathery wings on his back tightly retracted. The only garments he wore were a belted loan cloth around his waist, a firm sapphire necklace, and a pair of silver braces on each forearm.

    “Crix! Where’s Gadget?” he asked in concern yelling over the booming impacts of the lasers. Completely frozen in his position Crixul replied, “She didn’t show yet. Where are the other two?!”

    “They went ahead through that entrance ‘Ms. Light-show’ here is guarding.” Brooklyn was quick to notice his friend struggling as he knew the weakness to Crixul’s ability. “Crix, once I swoop up, I need you fire back at her that way I can close in on her. I doubt the other two will leave here without her.”

    Making no objections Crixul agreed, “Hurry up!” He gritted his teeth as he tried to keep hold of the shield. The series of energy blasts wailing toward them withered away the shield faster than he could replenish it.

    “Alright.” The gargoyle flicked his wrists and his braces gave a white flash. Brooklyn spread out his wings catching a sudden gale that wafted upwards carrying him high into the air. The moment Brooklyn became airborne, Crixul lowered his shield, dodging the last few laser blasts. Black orbs emerged at the palms of his hands. Wasting no time he flung them straight his opponent. The orbs continually replenished at his hands in his attempt to counterattack.

    As Crixul managed to overwhelm the enemy Brooklyn soared toward her with incredible speed. She managed to fire a couple of energy blasts toward him, but he easily evaded and she, too busy defending herself from Crixul.

    Brooklyn made a fist as he dived down for her. The woman jumped back in a flip barely dodging the gargoyle’s roaring strike. Folding his wings back, he gave her a quick compliment, “Nice reflexes there, Shego.”

    She stood several yards away from Brooklyn, “Hmph, you wanna see reflexes fly boy?” She peered at him with her neon green eyes. Her lips were as black as her long flowing hair, which made her pale face stand out like a sore thumb. She wore a jumpsuit with alternating colors of green and black. Her clawed gloves emitted a luminous green aura before she charged at him.

    Brooklyn swayed to the side, eluding Shego’s swing of her glowing talons, but she promptly went at him with a chain of fast pace offensive maneuvers. The gargoyle was familiar with the basic hack-and-slash approach but to his underestimation Shego’s form was anything but basic. She unleashed a series of horizontal slashes toward his face. Brooklyn crossed his arms guarding the blows with his braces. Within the next split second, Shego gave a swift jab straight into his gut. The force of her punch was not only strong but the energy radiating from her hands burned his skin on contact.

    Brooklyn growled in pain but was quickly quieted as Shego went back to his face hacking up the side of his cheeks. After a few swipes Shego launched a powerful uppercut onto the bottom of his jaw, sending him straight up in the air. He didn’t go very far; the green woman quickly snatched him by his tail and with all her might slammed the gargoyle onto the ground. Landing on his stomach and jaw didn’t help ease the pain from his previous wounds, not to mention his tail now had handprints of nasty burn marks.

    Shego paced toward her fallen adversary. She paused and noticed something; looking at her arms she noticed a strange black mist fuming from her body. It was as if her body was in flames, but she wasn’t burning. “Wha-whoa! What the?!” She started wobbling as she slowly levitated from the ground. She flailed her arms about in frustration, making it obvious she had no control over what was happening.

    “Argh!! What’s goin- You!” she pointed straight at Crixul who went over to Brooklyn’s aid. When Shego’s fist began to glow even brighter, Crixul shook a finger at her, “Ah ah. You try and shoot me, you’ll see how far and how fast you’ll blow yourself back.”

    The glow of her claw subsided and she barked, “Get me down from here!”

    Crixul shrugged, “If you say so.” He snapped his fingers. Shego watched as the black mist around her returned. But this time it wasn’t smoking out of her body. Instead the mist absorbed into her body, lots of it. Before she could even react, Shego’s body hit the ground hard landing on her back. She struggled as she tried to lift herself up, but she couldn’t. It was as if her body was too heavy for her to lift.

    Brooklyn got himself up, shaking off as much pain as he could, “Crix, keep her busy. I try get what they’re after before-” but Crixul intervened, “Brook, wait! You know you can’t take him on alone. You- Watch out!”

    The gargoyle took to the air the second Crixul warned him. A pack of beast heartless sprinted out from the castle. One was quick enough to pounce him; Crixul fell right on his back with the heartless attempting to gnaw on his arms. Thinking fast, a black mist poured out of the heartless and Crixul shoved the monster off him, sending it straight up in the air. The flying heartless howled as it shot up in the air and out of sight. Crixul jumped to his feet. Another heartless closed in on him, but Brooklyn swooped in just in time to punch them out. Brooklyn and Crixul stood back to back as more heartless surrounded them.

    “Thanks for taking your time, p**** cat.” Shego said to her comrade she got herself up.

    A large tiger, walked onto the balcony from were the heartless appeared, “I could say the same to you, Shego. But it seems you were in need of assistance.”

    She crossed her arms, “I was fine until the ‘nobody’ showed up. Looks like your pets didn’t give’em enough fight, Shere Khan.”

    The tiger frowned as he gazed at the gargoyle and the nobody fighting the heartless. “Well then, shall I give some the two some more fight?”

    She rolled eyes, “Jee, are you asking my permission? Well let me think about it.”

    Shere Khan gave a tisk, “No need for sarcasm.” The tiger spread his legs out in a solid pose. The black stripes on his body began to move and shift across his orange fur. His stripes then grew in size, covering his coat completely. Shere Khan now looked more like a panther with his all dark coat. His black fur started gurgling and bubbling. The tiger roared and dark figures began to jumping out of his body; swarms of beast heartless stampeded out of the tiger heading straight for Crixul and Brooklyn. It seemed the two were overwhelmed.

    “Alright, let’s get out of this place already.” Shego said to him.

    The Shere Khan’s black fur receded back to his normal tiger strips. He informed Shego, “He just found the book. We’re waiting on you.”

    The two ran down into the castle as she commented, “I’ll thank you two later.”

    “No! They’re getting away!” Brooklyn snarled as he started slashing the beasts menacingly. Crixul wielded sword made entirely from the black matter. He tried to cut through the heartless but they kept a tight circle around them.

    Crixul was outraged. He couldn’t let them get away. He was on the verge of telling Brooklyn to catch up to him, but he had just told Brooklyn it was too dangerous. Crixul didn’t know what to do. He just knew he couldn’t let them get away again. He couldn’t let ‘him’ get again. With a battle cry he sunk his sword straight into a heartless’s back; it’s body vaporized instantly.

    Something caught Brookyln and Crixul’s ears. High pitched whistles filled the air followed by numerous explosions from all around them. Missiles were being fired at them. “No…” Crixul then realized. The missiles were being fired at the heartless.

    “What’s that!” Brooklyn cried out as he pointed at the sky. Crixul looked up. Some kind of machine headed right towards them. With a loud ‘BA-BOOM’ the machine landed right on a heartless. It was one of those magitek-armors. Standing six feet tall, it’s anatomy was similar to that of those large yellow birds of this world, but it didn’t have a neck. It’s robotic face looked more like a dragon and it stood on large raptor-like legs. It had a long mechanical tail. What made it seem so ominous was its artillery. Its arms were a pair of gun barrels and small ballistic weaponry protruded all over it’s body. It’s gun-barrel arms began to rotate sending a wave of rapid fire at the remaining group of heartless; the sound of gunfire and whizzing bullets filled the air. Finishing a round of bullets, the magic-armor then opened its mouth releasing a glowing crimson laser, finishing off several more.

    “Hey behind you!” Brooklyn yelled out to the robot. A heartless lunged into the air straight at the robot. The magitek-armor spun a 360, striking the heartless with its large metal tail. The heartless slammed to the side of the castle wall into a poof of smoke.

    “Thanks Brook!” A familiar voice said through what sounded like an intercom. Crixul called out to the magitek-armor, “Gadget? Is that you?”

    The voice spoke through a speaker on the armor, “Yeah, sorry I’m late guys. Cyan and I stumbled on this armor and it took me a little longer than I thought to figure how to work this.”

    “That’s awesome!” Brooklyn shouted, “Now we don’t have to keep carrying you on our shoulder.”

    Gadget replied almost sounding offended, “Boy, was I really that much of a nuisance.”

    But Brooklyn was still cheering, “We’re going to kick some serious butt now!”

    “Come on!” Crixul was already running into the castle.

    “Ey, Crix! Wait up!” The two called out and quickly followed. Entering the stone tunnel the gargoyle glided in his way to catch up to Crix. The mechanical steps of Gadget’s magitek-armor clunked behind them.

    The nobody could feel the sudden leak of darkness. A portal was opening up; they were opening up a portal. “He’s not getting away from me…he’s not getting away from me!” he repeated to himself in anger.

    Then they saw it, the other end of the tunnel. Those three, Shego, Shere Khan, and him were in the room just up ahead. Crixul could feel his presence. He clenched his hands as black fog oozed and swirled around his arms. The nobody burst out his name in frustration, “Ulric! You’re not getting away from me again!”

    Running into the room, Crixul saw he was on top of a metal bridge which outlined the circular laboratory. He grasped the bar railing and looked below. He was just about to jump over the railing when something shot him, a thread of light beamed right at his stomach. The swirling dark mist around his arms quickly disappeared. “What?” He waved in hands in front him, trying to summon up the mist - nothing. He dropped his hands as he realized what happened to him. He was hit by a silence spell. His abilities we’re temporarily locked. The silence spell was one of the few things he remembered about, it used to be one of the many spells he knew before all this had happened.

    Brooklyn and the magitek-armor each stood at Crixul’s side looking down at their three adversaries in front of a dark portal. The gargoyle went to dive down for them, but slammed his nose into an invisible wall. A barrier had just been placed. Crixul banged his fists onto the transparent barrier. “Don’t you run away from me, Ulric!” His voice muffled across the side of the barrier, but it was clear enough to comprehend.

    “Your nobody’s a real pain, Ulric.” Shego pouted annoyingly.

    Shere Khan sat beside her, “What do you expect. They seek to feel whole again. I’m relieved I managed to destroy mine before anything happened.”

    The man standing behind Shego and the tiger gave out a malicious laugh. He wore a decorative blue robe outlined with various patterns of gold and red. His large sleeves draped from his wrists. He held a thick brown book with an orange spine. It was the parcel that they had been after, the only reason they set foot onto this world. His long dark hair was fastened in a short pony tail. Other than his hair and glasses, he looked just like Crixul. Ulric called with an instigative tone, “Is that it, Crixul? You want to feel whole again?”

    Crixul continued ro bang both fists on the invisible barrier, “Why did this happen, why did you chose darkness?! Why can’t I remember?! What was all that in that castle?!” He yelled to the top of his lung, “What happened to my memories?!”

    Ulric smirked. He took one hand and reached in the collar of his shirt. Slowly he pulled his hand, revealing what appeared to be a deck of cards, “You mean these memories.”

    “Those…are my memories…?” Crixul said under his breath.

    Ulric explained, “I had them for safe keeping as back up in case anything happened to my own memories during my experimentations. But alas, my memories were safe to begin with. Looks like I won’t need these. And you have no need for them either.” A purple light sparked from his fingers and the deck of cards burst into a black flames, completely vaporizing the cards right in front of Crixul’s eyes. “My…memories, no, no, no, no.” His soft voice was shaken.

    Ulric then looked to Shego and Shere Khan, “Let’s go. Now that we have this,” he gestured to the book, “Geegaw has no excuses. He will finish the task we’ve given him with no delay.”

    The intercom from the magitek-armor went off, “What are you doing to my father?!”

    Gadget didn’t get a response. Shego was the first to walk into the shadowy portal, followed by Shere Khan. Just before Ulric walked through he looked up to Crixul, who was his knees. He told his nobody, “Crixul, if we meet again, I’ll ensure your nonexistence for good.” He then stepped into the shadows which quickly dissipated on his leave. Once Ulric left, the charms were dispelled. The barrier vanished and the sudden surge of black fog emerged around Crixul’s body.

    He yelled out to the ceiling as the whole room began to shake. Brooklyn snapped at him, “Calm down Crix!”

    “No! We were so close! We can’t let them go now!” Crixul stood up and jumped over the railing landing at the bottom center of the laboratory. The nobody was in complete turmoil, “I don’t care what happens! I have to know!” Crixul held out his arm. And a black mist started to accumulate. But this mist was different.

    Gadget cried out in fear, “Brook! Stop him, he’s going to open a portal!” The gargoyle was way ahead of her; he swooped down toward the nobody. Brooklyn grabbed Crixul from behind; he hooked his arms from under his shoulders. The gargoyle then lifted Crixul in the air and threw him down into the ground.
    “Crix, are you nuts? You know what happened last time you did that! We nearly got ourselves killed!”

    Crixul got himself up his face full of anger, “I said I don’t care! I have to-” Crixul was caught short as Brooklyn punched him in the face, knocking him to the ground again.

    “I said, ‘Calm down!’ ”

    “Guys, stop it.” The magitek-armor took the long way down the winding stairs from the side and come up to them.

    Brooklyn kept his gaze down on Crixul, “Just listen to yourself. You know you’re going to get yourself killed if walk though the darkness again. Ulric has complete control over the heartless and lesser nobodies, you know that! You don’t stand a chance. Are you even listening to me?”

    Crixul was on his hands and knees, his face hung down, “He had my memories. He ‘had’ them the whole time, and he just destroyed them.” He shook his head with total grief.

    Brooklyn huffed, “Man, you don’t need those memories.”

    Crixul looked up at the gargoyle and put his hand to his chest. “You don’t have this emptiness, Brooklyn. This emptiness…”

    “Crix, you have us.” Gadget told him. Her voice wasn’t through the intercom this time. The tiny mouse was standing right by his hand, looking up at him. Gadget’s red hair and light purple clothes were covered in soot. Crixul’s expression was blank as he looked at Gadget before closing his eyes few several seconds.

    “Crix, it’s going to be alright. You don’t have to feel empty Crixul.”

    “Yeah man,” Brooklyn crossed his arms and said sardonically with a laugh, “When you gonna start appreciating us?”

    He sigh as he sat back with a leg crossed. It was just all too complicated. He could still feel the emptiness inside of him…but it was almost the total opposite around these two. One of the first people he remembered meeting told him that, “giving was the greatest gift.” It was since then he decided to help people. Very slowly he felt something filling that hole…or at least was able to ignore it for sometime. But he had encountered Ulric on several occasions and his desire to be whole would just consume him. The desire to know why had been edging him on ever since.

    Crix gave a weak chuckle. Maybe he didn’t have a heart, but could it be true that others could share their heart with him, his friends. Just now he let that desire take over him again. He’ll try not let that happened again.

    He breathed in deeply and asked Gadget, “So…did Cyan and the other’s make it okay?”

    The little mouse smiled, “Now there’s the Crix that we know.”

    Crixul raised himself up on one knee looking at both Brooklyn and Gadget, his two friends. He smiled at them, but in the back of his head he thought about the faint images of several people. He could see there faces, feel the comfort they give him, but had absolutely no clue who they were. Could they have been my friends, or Ulric's friends...before all this had happened?

    Story's setting
    To give a quick explanation about the setting again, it takes place in the FFVI world where an evil empire and out to conquer the world (simple enough). The characters were inside one of the dungeon/laboratories of the Empire. The prisioners were that of the resistance group and Cyan was a character in the game who was part of that group.
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    Brooklyn
    Brooklyn is one of the main characters in the Disney Series, Gargoyles

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    Now if anyone has seen the show would be quick to remember a simple gargoyle fact: Gargoyles can't fly! They can only glide on air currents. So why was Brooklyn a total aero-arcobat here? Well to make a long story short, Brooklyn received two magical items that could help him move about in different worlds freely as well as enchance his abilites. He bumped into Crixul as he was gaining on Ulric.

    The first magical item he has is the sapphire necklace. This necklace prevents him from turning into stone at the exposure of sunlight. With it he could go in and out of stone sleep whenever he pleases. Then there are the Aero braces, which give him limited "wind magic." This way he can control the air currents around him to make true flight possible.

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    Gadget
    Then we have Gadget Hackwrench. Again you'd have to be familiar with the old-school, early 90's Disney series. Gadget is from the series Chip n' Dale: Rescue Rangers.

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    Gadget had teamed up with Brooklyn and Crixul when she found out they were after Ulric, who had kidnapped her father Geegaw. (Geegaw is also a character in the series but his name was only mentioned because he was supposedly deceased )

    Gadget is the genius mechanical engineer and inventor. Before this story she was tagging along the two on a small duel propellor machine, but now things are different. But now she now come across a Magitek-armor which she controls inside the machine. Which she'll ue from then on.

    Oh and for those of you not familiar with Magitek-armor, it's derived from Final Fantasy VI

    Here's a pic of one
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    Though FFVI is pretty much the original spot of the magitek armor there is a striking resemblance with Riku's Machina Maw from FFX2
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    Shere Khan
    Who remember's Disney's Jungle Book?! Well that's Shere Khan came from.

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    In my story, Shere Khan is one of the main antagonists. He's now a heartless and has a very unique ability. His own body is a portal of darkness. His black stripes grow and cover his entire body and he able to unleash various jungle-beast heartless, and a lot of them at that.
    (This was actually one of my very first ideas of an extra Kingdom Hearts character, next to having Gadget in a magitek armor ^_^ )

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    Shego
    Now going back to more current cartoons we have Shego, one of the best known villains in the Disney series, Kim Possible.

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    Her powers are pretty much the same, she has heighten reflexes and strength and she can emit green energy blast that can be both concussive and thermal. But I stretched it a bit so that she can actually shoot the energy as laser beams. Though I did not give her the power to fly (way too much similarity to Teen Titan's Starfire )

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    Ulric and Crixul

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    Art by http://lynxgriffin.deviantart.com (she has an really cool KH fan-comic on her site too! Check it out!)

    Now to my OCs. They're pretty much Final Fantasy-based. Ulric lived in a seperate Final Fantasy world as one of the most powerful wizards around. Ulric was very passionate about his magic; he wasn't the friendliest person but he was no villain (at the time!!).

    One day he managed to create portal (not of darkness) to another world. It took much of his energy but it was completely worth, never did he or his people know of other worlds such as this. This curiousity soon became and obsession. He wanted to go out and discover other worlds, gain as much knowledge as possible.
    He even stumbled upon the world of the great Yen Sid. Ulric pleaded to Yen Sid to teach him more efficent magic to travel about but Yen Sid warned him that his means of travel and lack of understanding of the worlds and between was dangerous. Yen Sid told about a war between different worlds against darkness, and such.
    Ulric didn't bother to heed the warning (thinking that Yen Sid was just intimatdated by his growing power and understanding).

    So to cut the story short, Ulric had actually been observing the battle of Sora and the Heartless and Nobodies. He saw how easily it was for the heartless and Nobodies to travel to different worlds and used this observations to his advantage. In the end (for various reasons) Ulric submitted his heart into darkness, and now has big plans.

    Becoming into a heartless led to the birth of his Nobody, Crixul. Ulric happened to be the very first person to greet Crixul. At first Crixul wasn't sure who he was and gave Ulric a chance to explain. Ulric managed to trick Crixul into wandering the Castle Oblivion, where Ulric managed to manipulate the castle's power. As Crixul's memories were returning, they were quickly stolen by the castle (but he had tiny remnents left of his past, like the faint images of the people he once knew). Once Crixul loses his key memories, Ulric abandons him and Crixul's story continues from there.

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    Ulric's magic at the end
    Ulric has invented several new forms of black magic, including the ability to conjure up Cold Fire. Cold fire is completely black. It burns anything it touches, but until regular fire which incinerates objects into ash and releases energy as heat and light, Cold fire literally destroys what it consumes, producing no heat or light leaving no ash or dust. It's a magic of pure destruction.

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    Crixul's power
    Now about his powers. It might have been a bit confusing and probably figured that he can control darkness...Not really.

    Crixul has the power to control gravity; more specifically he can control the gravitons that exist within every molecule of matter. Gravitons (not yet discovered by actual science) are the theorical elementary particle that meditates(is the source of) the force of gravity.

    (If you want a more indepth explanation about the power read below, but just so you know it gets complicated).

    So I figured I used the idea for fantasy purposes. Now I'll try to explain, think of every atom with a shadow. Without that shadow, an atom is massless. Crixul can rip those shadows off any matter and utilize it in it's pure black state. He can condense the gravitons from a gas to liquid to solid and vice versa.

    Now when the gravitons are ripped from, let's say a chair, that chair now has no mass, therefore is not suspetible to the force of gravity; it's now weightless. (Hence the moments a black shadow would pour out of someone's body).

    But put the gravitons back in place, and the chair has it's weight back. Add extra gravitons to the chair, and the chair is more senstive to gravity; it'll weigh more than before (Hence when Crixul condensed the gravitons into Shego and she was so heavy she couldn't lift herself up).

    But once Crixul submits control from the gravitons, they gravitons immediately fly back into place and everything's weight is returned to normal.

    Crixul's weakness of his power is exposing the controlled gravitons to sudden bursts of energy (Hence Shego breaking down Crixul's shield). Think of yourself balancing on a thin plank. If a sudden burst of a wind blew right passed you, it would be just enough to make you wobble and lose your balance.

    Gravitons in it's pure state do not reflect light (which is why it's black).

    Crixul doesn't know the full extent of his power yet, which is why frustration and lead to very unexpected things. (There is a more advanced level to his power).

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    Soooo yeah. I thought I'd give some in depth elaboration of the story and characters' background since I most likely won't go back to this story. But it was really fun making it though, so who knows (I so proud of myself I was able to figure a way to bring back Gadget and Brooklyn)

    COMMENTS AND CRITICISM ARE MOST WELCOME!!! :)

    Crixul and Ulric (c) atmos00000
    Art of Crixul and Ulric (c) lynxgriffin
    Everything else (c) Disney and Square Enix, respectively