i originally made a story like this once, but i noticed that i didnt do a very good job on it, so i decided to change it up a bit after a while, so, here is- A New Story of Two Star Crossed Lovers, Chapter 1 the bigining: a memory not to forget ~I’ve come up here for months now, looking over what has gone wrong. I know I shouldn’t live in the past, but the future has just been bleak. I’ve stood on this hill, playing back the war that is frozen to this green battlefield. Vines growing around rusted swords, staffs scattered everywhere, some singed from blazing flame spells, some broken into bits. Flowers using shattered helmets as pots. I can see Aura from Soldiers, pleasantly floating around everything. Sometimes I wonder if some departed soldiers are from what we used to consider the enemy country, or if the dead soldiers play the war back in their minds, and still think its going on, and that’s why they haven’t left, but I guess that’s just something ill have to ask them once its my time, because ill never leave this kingdom, this is my home, and ill watch over it even when there’s a new queen. I guess I just can’t get over how two completely different kingdoms, could come together once something like love came over two people from the kingdoms. Maybe, just once more, I can play back what happened to these kingdoms- I mean, this kingdom. This all started with one coronation… - A girl walked up the busy city street carrying a loaf of bread and heading towards a castle. She broke a bit off and stuffed it into her mouth as she weaved in and out of a big crowd that had gathered at the base of the castle. She sat on some stairs that had also done a fine job as ‘bleachers’. She looked towards the main attraction of this uprising. Her eye automatically caught her best friend next to the queen. “My good people, I have gathered you all here this fine day, to honor my daughters 17th birthday, in about one year, if Akarui finds a suitable husband, she will be able to relieve these old hands of Destiny kingdom.” Said the queen, she had been talking about the girls good friend; the princess. The girl giggled. It was true; Akarui was to have a coronation stating that she was to be queen once she found a husband. But there was one thing that could stop it… “Now, if we go into war with any kingdom, preferably not Oblivion Kingdom, and she happens to lose her life during battle, I will have to continue to hold the kingdom until one of Hikaru’s children are of age to take over in the Star Kingdom. Don’t ANY of you forget that.” The girl looked over at her friend Akarui and saw that she didn’t look to happy at this comment. Akarui was the head of the captains in the army. Not only was she tough on her soldiers, but even rookies had difficulty, and some of the people wanting to join the army, most of the time ended up as stable boys because they couldn’t pass her instructions.
thanks guys, now for the important matter... Chapter two is now up, and this one has a cliff hanger. *ebil smirk* Chapter 2 an unhealthy habit ~ The girl was kinda jealous of her friend, Akarui had long shining dirty blonde hair, silver blue eyes to die for, fair skin that burnt quite easily. She had a slender body that all the guys always noticed first, next to her chest which was a fair size. She wasn’t too short, not too tall, but not exactly average height. Not only that but because Akarui had better clothes then her she felt out of place when she was near her. â€so Queeny, you found a nice boyfriend to marry yet?†the girl laughed as the gathering was done. Akarui pouted, “I’m not a queen YET Tenshi, and no, I haven’t, a lot of the people I’ve met so far treat me either WAY to nice, like just to impress me, or they just want me to choose them cause they want to be king.†Tenshi sighed, “So all of them are big fat jerks.†Akarui looked up at the castle and then down in the courtyard. “Maybe someday I’ll find a good person…….one day, when I’m ready.†A slight wind blew her hair around; her white sleeveless collared shirt didn’t move as how it stayed close to her skin, her black pant legs blew around, as did her many white and gold belts. /././meanwhile\.\.\ A boy, no older then 17 or 18 looked over the land that lied beyond the castle. A huge crevice opened up from result of there being a wide river there a long time ago, now there was a little river at the bottom of it and a few trees. He was a boy with black, messy hair, fair skin, shining red eyes that when needed seemed to burn holes through a person. His whole attire was made up of black, only one thing was silver, which was armor with a spiked edge. His ‘shirt’ almost like a turtle neck, though it wasn’t tight against his neck, it was very loose and was a few inches away from his neck. Because his shirt was also kind of like a cloak, it came down an inch below his knees and opened up around his hips. “Arashi,†a voice sounded from behind. “What is it?†the boy responded, “you need to stop looking back here, it’s unhealthy to stare out into the abyss of the land,†Arashi clenched his fist against the wall, “Father, you’re a king, not a doctor. So don’t go telling me what’s healthy or unhealthy.†His father glared at him, “in any case, I have an important matterto speak to you about, and it might lead us to victory against the Destiny Kingdom.â€
uh... not sure if a few months is double posting :sleepy: and... also not sure why no ones posts other then mine are on here..... but, im here to apologize, cause my dad deleted the file that this story was on and i have no way of getting it back, so it might take a while to type up the chapter that was going to come next, gomen nasai T^T
OMG JAP wait is this the rite one? i hink it is .......hmmm....okie dokie nvm that. I FREAKIN' LOVE IT!!! i like how you described everything so well. Great Job!
<3 i really like this idea it seems like a Romeo and Juliet sort of scene and i really like it Keep working on it <3 you got better on the 2nd chapter <3
