Traditional Art New Drawing

I drew this on Saturday I think it was.I have been writing a story since 2 days ago.But I have been planning and thinking about it since a month ago.This drawing is the main character of the story.His name is Kentaro Matsumoto.I had to look at a lot of different anime guys to try and get the hair the way I wanted it to look and also the face.I had trouble with the mouth.But yeah I decided to leave like that.

http://i141.photobucket.com/albums/r77/vma_92/Picture599.jpg

I would like CnC please.

 

I like it! You're a great artist. It did look a little slanted, though, the way his body parts lined up. Other than that, great job!

 

Hey, nice work. I love the facial expression, but the nose is too far to the right and the bottom left corner should probably be turned upwards a little more (like you're spinning it in a circle, but just a tiny bit).The line under the bottom lip should probably be a little farther to the right so it's more under the center of the lip. This way it will fit the way the head is angled.

That's pretty much it. Nice picture and keep up the good work! :D

 

S-S-S-SHADING! Shade it, love. It makes your piccy shmexy. ;)

Alrighty then. All is well except for the chin and jaw. Yes, it IS slanted . . . but it because he's missing the left jaw. D8 The shadow is great hun, you need to make the left jaw before that. xD Because of the jaw thing, your entire facial expression looks a little awkward. His mouth is just fine. You eyes tell you something is wrong, again, because of the jaw. T_T

Work on perspective hun, and maybe a little proportion study might do you some good. Hair is also fine, as it matched the head and there's volume. 8D Well, that is all for now.

 

Thanks you guys.I was actually going to shade it but then,I don't know,it began to look weird so I just left it like this.And yes I'll fix the jaw part.I finished a new drawing yesterday that I have been working on for two days.It was kind of hard but I was able to make it look the way I wanted it to look.I'll try and post it sometime day if I can.Again thank you for the comments.